Fic for swissmarg

Dec 25, 2010 14:22

Author: briony_tallis
Recipient: swissmarg
Title: Of Bad Faith and Good Love
Pairing: Lucius/Luna
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2450
Summary: Draco Malfoy discovers (and doesn't discover) some disconcerting things about his family.
Author's Notes: I very much hope you like this, and thanks to my lovely readers!

Of Bad Faith and Good Love )

*het, .fic exchange: winter 2010-2011, user: bluemermaid, pairing: lucius/luna

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swissmarg December 26 2010, 12:55:21 UTC
Thank you, Happy Elf! I particularly like Narcissa in this, how she remains so calm and icy despite how much she must be hurting. Luna is fabulous, the perfect mix of innocence and wisdom beyond her years. Interesting that Draco used the angle on Luna that Lucius is nothing but a bastard and is only going to hurt her. I wonder if that's what really bothers him about the situation (i.e. if he actually cares for Luna himself), or if he was just saying that to try and manipulate her. You never know with those Slytherins! All round a very satisfying and well done fic, thank you again!

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bluemermaid January 21 2011, 03:04:26 UTC
Oh, I am so very happy that you enjoyed your gift! This pair is so rare I was worried about how to do it justice, ha. It was certainly an interesting and fun time working on it for you, though! I personally do think Draco cares about Luna being hurt, but I like how it can be seen either way. Anyway, thanks for allowing me to experiment with such a unique pair, and again, I am glad you liked it. :)

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dexstarr December 26 2010, 19:02:41 UTC
I really liked the first part of this, and Narcissa's reaction made me wonder if she really knew what Lucius was doing with Luna, and that's why she wasn't upset, or she was, and just masking it.

Interesting fic, it made me think and the ending surprised me.

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bluemermaid January 21 2011, 03:06:40 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you found it interesting, as it was certainly interesting to write!

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deathlydragon December 26 2010, 21:16:24 UTC
Uh, I love the part with Draco and Luna. Draco saying such things about his father is really confusing in a good way. And the interaction between all those characters was really interesting and very contrasting. Really liked that.

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bluemermaid January 21 2011, 03:09:36 UTC
Of course you like the Draco parts best. ;)

I am glad you liked this, even the confusing parts, haha.

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uniquepov January 2 2011, 15:50:49 UTC
What a lovely fic! I've never seen this pairing; would never have considered it, truthfully, but it's wonderfully written! All the characters are believable and IC - well done!

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bluemermaid January 21 2011, 03:10:20 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :)

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jessicaqueen January 3 2011, 00:57:00 UTC
While it had occurred to me that one of Draco's parents might have connected with Luna while she was imprisoned in their house, I'll admit that I always thought it was much more likely to be Narcissa, given the glimpses we get of her in canon. However, this was lovely, and fairly believable, so maybe I'll have to rethink that. ;)

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bluemermaid January 21 2011, 03:12:40 UTC
To be honest, it was a bit of a challenge, creating a Lucius who could have connected to Luna in such a way. But it seems to have worked, so thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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