I quite enjoyed this. One concrit, if I may...(and is just my humble opinion) "He is like a supernova and its aftermath" doesn't read quite right to me. Just "like a supernova" sounds better and still works.
This was very intriguing, I liked the direction you chose for this. :) Nice work!
I notice you haven't claimed this pairing (or any other, for that matter) and the prompt you used is not one of ours. Next time, be sure the fic is for one of our challenges or for a claim you have in this community. :) Also, could you please title your post as indicated by the community rules? Thank you! :)
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"He is like a supernova and its aftermath" doesn't read quite right to me. Just "like a supernova" sounds better and still works.
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Thanks again!
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I notice you haven't claimed this pairing (or any other, for that matter) and the prompt you used is not one of ours. Next time, be sure the fic is for one of our challenges or for a claim you have in this community. :)
Also, could you please title your post as indicated by the community rules? Thank you! :)
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Oh! *Blush* sorry I'm terriblly sorry about that... I won't let it happen again!
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