Our Fingers Shape; Kibum/Taemin

[debriefings]

Title: Our Fingers Shape
Pairing: Kibum/Taemin
Rating: PG
Word count: 827
Summary In which romance really isn’t Kibum’s strong point, but he tries with favorable results.

Prompt: #5; Taemin/Key, but other pairs are also okay; "umm, i like anything, rly! i'm a /big fan/ of first-time fic, whether it be getting together OR have been together and it

Comments

[formattitude]

this was so lovely and not too sweet. so fumbly and cute, ide ;___;

[lovescone]

SO LATE COMMENT IS LATE but i wanted to wait until after reveals so i could spazz properly and reveal myself as who you wrote for hahahahahaha.

BASICALLY HI I LOVED THIS WHOLE THING BUT PARTS I FOUND OMG SUPER ADORABLE AND STUFF:

Jonghyun sucks in his left cheek, eyes narrowing, and Kibum can tell by the flush in his cheeks that Jonghyun is annoyed with him.

this mental image omg i could see it so clearly and sobs i just love jonghyun's faces sometimes omg slkdfs

Kibum doesn’t do romance, and he definitely draws the line when Jonghyun starts substituting Taemin’s name in Juliette and JoJo.

NGL I WAS SITTING HERE GOING "OH KEY, PLS DO." ;__; your key is so presh i just slfkjsdklfjs sobs at you

And sometimes, he’ll catch Taemin staring at him from the shadow of his bangs.

i lovelovelove this too b/c i have a fascination with taemin's hair and skdjfs omg. ♥_____♥

also the entire last scene i adore it so sldjflskdfjsljkdfs ♥♥ you are awesome ;_; gives soul ;_;

[onew]

And sometimes, he’ll catch Taemin staring at him from the shadow of his bangs.
This was overkill, I'm telling you.

I literally cooed after reading the fic, not lying. /wibbles

[matchynishi]

omg this was so wonderful. :( I love how natural you wrote them, somewhat awkward and uncomfortable, but then the ENDING!!! <333

[mnemonic_psych]

He feels, rather than sees, Taemin smile against his lips

this is one of my favourite things in fic. skdjsdf this is so well-written, thank you ^___^