Brave New Ship - Thrill of the Chase

Jul 19, 2007 15:47

Title: Thrill of the Chase
Pairing(s): Thompson/Bennet; Claude/Bennet UST hints; Thompson/Claude hints
Rating: NC-17 for graphic sexual content and drug use
Warnings: drug use, non-con*
Summary: Bennet discovers some things about his boss. Maybe.
Word Count: 3395 per Word Perfect (3412 per MSWord - yay for punctuation marks = words! O.o)
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fic, fic challenge #1: brave new ship, thompson/bennet

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fantasticpants July 19 2007, 22:04:42 UTC
Damn. Your Thompson is one scary motherfucker.

This was very nicely done. And sick. And wrong. And creepy. And hot. And evil.

I kinda want more.

And I love you for having Claude call Bennet 'Pup'.

...Did I mention your Thompson is one creepy sonofabitch?

I now truly consider it my civic duty to finish the fluffy-ish Claude/Bennet (even though I was nearly angst-ed to death by the recent Sandra/Bennet). I think they both deserve it.

Yet sadly, the threesomey thoughts are not yet eradicated from my brain. x_x

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g_shadowslayer July 19 2007, 22:13:21 UTC
...Did I mention your Thompson is one creepy sonofabitch?

Honestly? Sometimes I worry that writing this kind of thing comes so easy to me... :) He is, isn't he?

When I first started this, I was kind of wondering how I could keep Claude and Bennet in line and not have them kill him way before the series ever happened. Then I realized that the "first" time Bennet meets the Haitian didn't really have to be. It's so handy having people who can play with memories ;) And that's when I realized I could be as evil as I wanted to with virtually no consequences...

I now truly consider it my civic duty to finish the fluffy-ish Claude/Bennet (even though I was nearly angst-ed to death by the recent Sandra/Bennet). I think they both deserve it.

Oh yes, you must! If nothing else, the Bennet in my head would really appreciate it, 'cause the Thompson in my head is making him really nervous with that smile...

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What can I say....? mossymermaid July 19 2007, 22:38:04 UTC
.... aw I feel so dirty after reading that. This is an interesting power dynamic you have going on here in the fic. Not interesting, truthful. everyone in character here, including Claude.

Your work here is done. Wow.

xD xD xD

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Re: What can I say....? g_shadowslayer July 20 2007, 01:24:09 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad it worked! :D

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veetvoojagig July 19 2007, 23:49:12 UTC
Oh. My. God.

I feel so outclassed. The Thompson/Bennet fic I'm writing, while creepy and slimy, is nowhere near this... I don't know.

I loved it.

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g_shadowslayer July 20 2007, 01:30:59 UTC
Thank you! ::blushes::

Don't feel outclassed -- I've got a lot of years of experience writing the creepy (years of Babylon 5 fandom with a fondness for the Shadows...). :D

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veetvoojagig July 20 2007, 08:54:10 UTC
*laughs* Yeah, this is my first attempt at it. I'll be pleased if it's half as good as yours.

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fantasticpants July 20 2007, 19:39:58 UTC
What sorta thing did you write for B5? *is curious*

I'm kind of a Bester/Garibaldi shipper (talk about your morally grey). And Londo/G'Kar OTP, obviously.

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entangled_now July 20 2007, 07:31:33 UTC
This is scary and disturbing and so very Thompson, who is a creepy creepy man, with his creepy machinations! But none of this stopped it from being very creepily good...very creepily good indeed.

I love Claude's subtle warnings...

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g_shadowslayer July 20 2007, 14:48:28 UTC
*grins* Thank you! He is pretty creepy, isn't he? :)

Poor Claude. He really doesn't dare come right out and say anything... (If I write more in this 'universe', that'll be dealt with)

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fantasticpants July 20 2007, 14:54:22 UTC
(If I write more in this 'universe', that'll be dealt with)

Okay. What do I need to bribe you with?

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g_shadowslayer July 20 2007, 15:42:44 UTC
Well... um...

*tries for innocent* *fails*

There's always this... :D

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liritarofrohan July 20 2007, 14:11:46 UTC
My gods... That was... disturbingly hot. *Grins*

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g_shadowslayer July 20 2007, 14:50:19 UTC
Thank you! *grins* My reputation is secure :D

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liritarofrohan July 20 2007, 15:33:23 UTC
Oh, of course. *Grins back* After a fic like that, any reputation would be safe.

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g_shadowslayer July 20 2007, 16:08:38 UTC
Mine is an evil laugh... :D

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