Amid all the stress...

Mar 21, 2009 14:32

I managed to find this little gem. And before you ask, yes, someone did actually write this.

"With a sigh, he moved to make the one thing he knew he could, French toast, reaching for the fresh bread before he finished reaching for it."

You would think that that would have been picked up by the beta... Ah well, it made me laugh.

Now, back to my (

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tsaiko March 21 2009, 19:03:51 UTC
Actual line from a book "The long, dark haired woman and straightened her shirt before pulled back with long dark hair." Just in case between the first part of the sentence and the last you thought she had magically become a short blonde!

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rappleart3 March 21 2009, 19:13:04 UTC
The stupidity of some people, and their betas, bever fails to amuse me...

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