so the publisher gave me some good advice on what needs to be change in the comic's script and I've started changing things. flip back and forth between Himiko's day and her first Valkyrie adventure. trying to give more detail in the description of the panels. it goes slowly though with all things I have to do in a day plus work plus, but it is getting there. I'm hoping to be done with the script by the end of the month. if you're curious about art work here's link to my deviant art page
http://asukakanea.deviantart.com