but in a good way! a very good way, like in a kind of flopping-all-over-the-keyboard kind of way. because it's so sad but it still somehow manages to be hot?? while also being kind of awkward-first-time and cathartic but sdjfksd you struck such a great balance of all those things that it was believable and real. which was great, okay.
all the details totally made it even more heartbreaking, like the stupid things they do and everything he's going to miss and all that stuff. ;_____; seung bb don't cry it's gonna be ok omg
also i love your characterisation of jiyong. a+ tbh.
AND THE PORN.
WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE PORN.
IT WAS VERY GOOD PORN, FOR ALL THE REASONS MENTIONED ABOVE.
ALL THE A+ TO THE PORN.
and this part omfg:
He waited for Jiyong to continue, waited through what felt like an eternity of moons falling and suns rising, until he wasn't sure he was breathing anymore; but Jiyong just pulled him in tighter, shaking his head wordlessly, and suddenly Hyunseung understood,
( ... )
omg this was just, really, really hot. and I definitely envy your ability to paint a picture. the emotions and characterization felt real and not forced. there were some lines in here where I was just like "wow that's /perfect/."
Thank you...GSeung are so rare and I was really happy to see it in my friend's page so hoping it will be a good one I've started to read and...it is definitely an awesome fic and here I am at 2am sobbing trying to write a decent comment ;____; They are not my bias but this is my forever missed otp I can't forget their last hug on the street during BB doc that's so lovely and sad ❤
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but in a good way! a very good way, like in a kind of flopping-all-over-the-keyboard kind of way. because it's so sad but it still somehow manages to be hot?? while also being kind of awkward-first-time and cathartic but sdjfksd you struck such a great balance of all those things that it was believable and real. which was great, okay.
all the details totally made it even more heartbreaking, like the stupid things they do and everything he's going to miss and all that stuff. ;_____; seung bb don't cry it's gonna be ok omg
also i love your characterisation of jiyong. a+ tbh.
AND THE PORN.
WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE PORN.
IT WAS VERY GOOD PORN, FOR ALL THE REASONS MENTIONED ABOVE.
ALL THE A+ TO THE PORN.
and this part omfg:
He waited for Jiyong to continue, waited through what felt like an eternity of moons falling and suns rising, until he wasn't sure he was breathing anymore; but Jiyong just pulled him in tighter, shaking his head wordlessly, and suddenly Hyunseung understood, ( ... )
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but omg bb thank you so much, thank you for all the things you appreciated about this. I'm glad you liked it, I'm deff glad to be done with it! lol
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anyway great fic. I really enjoyed it.
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They are not my bias but this is my forever missed otp I can't forget their last hug on the street during BB doc that's so lovely and sad ❤
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