Fiction: Return to the Pit of Death

Sep 26, 2007 22:26

It takes less than a second for the ground to fall away beneath my feet. I manage to grab onto something - a branch or worn rope it would seem - but it’s too weak to hold my weight and I can already feel it starting to give. I don’t dare look down, but there’s no need to. I can hear them waking from their slumber, hissing, rattling and slithering ( Read more... )

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loolaa September 29 2007, 11:05:59 UTC
Cool story, is this how you feel at work? Is this about a previous job? How you felt when you lost the job? It's really good.

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randomgirl666 September 29 2007, 11:55:49 UTC
Thanks. It's a combination of things... how I felt when I lost my last job obviously. It was inspired by intense boredom last week. Things seem to slide backwards a bit when I'm unoccupied for a long time.

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