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Genius In Bed

Jan 12, 2009 13:57

Title: Genius In Bed
Rating: R for a little something at the end.
Pairing: Elijah/Orlando
Disclaimer: No I don't own them, yes it is made up.
Feedback: Any feedback at all is welcome. :)
Note: Written for orlijah_month 2009 prompt 5 - Genius or Prodigy Orlijah

( You're an absolute genius in bed... )

elijah/orlando, au

Comments 19

tweedle_ January 12 2009, 14:54:38 UTC

Lovely lovely fic. The way Elijah grows up but doesn't really change is so delightful. And I really like them getting to know each other before have scorchingly hot sex. :)

randomdarling January 12 2009, 15:28:10 UTC

Thank you very much for commenting - and for pointing out my typos! I'd much rather someone pointed them out to me, so thanks for that!

yukisherry January 12 2009, 16:29:03 UTC

wonderful, sweet and fic. :D *hugs* i love elijah as a doctor!

randomdarling January 13 2009, 19:17:57 UTC

Thanks for commenting - me too! :D

stormatdusk January 12 2009, 20:07:16 UTC

there was a sort of quiet sweetness about this that i really liked. :)

randomdarling January 13 2009, 19:18:32 UTC

Thank you for reading, glad you liked it. :)

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randomdarling January 13 2009, 19:19:11 UTC

Thanks for reading. :) I'm glad you liked the pacing - I wasn't sure if it was working but I needed to get the story out somehow. :)

itstonedme January 13 2009, 00:47:14 UTC

What an enjoyable read, so leisurely, so economical, about ordinary events that aren't ordinary at all. Really nice. :)

randomdarling January 13 2009, 19:19:59 UTC

Exactly - those 'ordinary' moments are the ones I remember the most! Thanks for reading! :)