Thirty-Love

[randomdarling]

Title: Thirty Love
Pairing: Elijah/Orlando
Rating: R
Disclaimer: No I don’t own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any is appreciated.
Notes: A Wimbledon ball-boy/tennis player AU.  Slightly angsty - it turned out a lot less ‘sweetness and light’ than I initially wanted it to.

Comments

[verangel]

WOW you captured the game and pressure perfectly and the sex was definitly cathartic (and HOT). This was really a gorgeous story.
hugs you xooxoxox v

[randomdarling]

Thank you very much for reading and commenting, you always leave such great feedback. :) x

[moit]

This was lovely. I love the dedication they have to one another, the way they can read each other. Very nicely done, dear.

[randomdarling]

Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment, I'm really pleased you liked it. :)

[msilverstar]

I like that you wrote Orlando losing, it's so easy and fun to imagine them winning. Angsty but good.

[randomdarling]

I guess I must be a pessimist at heart, because losing felt more realistic than winning. :P Thanks for reading and commenting, it's much appreciated. :)

[aliensouldream]

OOh, this was very tense, sad and hot all at the same time. The crying got me bigtime.

[randomdarling]

Aw, thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment, I'm really pleased you liked this. :)

[foxrafer]

You show the honesty between them and how strongly they care for each other beautifully. Lovely piece.

[randomdarling]

Thanks for reading, your feedback is really appreciated. :)