Fic: The Birthday

Sep 15, 2013 09:33

Title: The Birthday
Author: random_nic
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Luke and Noah are property of As The World Turns, Telenext Media, and CBS Television. Or of a leprechaun with a sick sense of humor.
Word Count: 1750
Summary: Written for jb1183's prompt it's all a misunderstanding for the what_did_you_do community.

I have one more surprise for your birthday. )

fanfic, noah, atwt, luke

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valenti1965 September 15 2013, 14:41:21 UTC
OMG OMG OMG Nic!! I am lol, here and the kids are thinking I've lost the plot! You know I am going to be thinking of this fic when I see him on Friday night lol

Forgot about winning that competition in the shack....and WOW Best present ever!

Love love loved it!!!

Nuke and my hero....what more can a girl want in a fic?!? nothing!

You are the best! Mwah xxx

ps...video rocks :-)

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random_nic October 1 2013, 15:18:53 UTC
Happy you liked it, Louise! And glad you enjoyed your hot date with Jimmy. ;)

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sarahsezlove September 15 2013, 17:18:20 UTC
O - M - G!!!!! I'm laughing myself to tears, here!
I so didn't see that coming.
Louise is one lucky lady.

Totally fabulous! And I'm so jealous you can knock out such hilarious perfection so damn quickly. Wish the hell I could!!

:)

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random_nic October 1 2013, 15:20:24 UTC
Thank you Sarah! I feel like they were a little OOC here, but I'm glad you thought it came off okay.

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wheelie47 September 15 2013, 17:37:19 UTC
Totally loved this, Nic! Adorable silly boys! For once, one of Luke's mistakes didn't end up in a total disaster - a win win for everyone. And you made Louise's day - which is even better!

You put a smile on my face!

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random_nic October 1 2013, 15:22:21 UTC
I would've reversed this, because I think it more likely Luke would like a band called Carnage of Thought than Noah. But Noah's so Boy Scout, I couldn't envision him getting such a detail wrong. Whereas I could see Luke being excited thinking one of Noah's heroes was appearing, and rushing to get tickets without doubling checking things.

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scj0710 September 15 2013, 17:54:01 UTC
Absolutely delightful!

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random_nic October 1 2013, 15:23:29 UTC
Thank you Stacey!

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cindyls1969 September 15 2013, 19:20:50 UTC
I'm reading this thinking OMG Louise is gonna have kittens. Lovely little smile of a story. And I just can't help but like Jimmy now too....just a little.

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valenti1965 September 15 2013, 19:57:37 UTC
I did!! lol Jimmy rocks...end of :-)

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random_nic October 1 2013, 15:24:09 UTC
Thanks, Cindy. I have no idea what Jimmy's personality is like, so if I got him wrong here, I'll never know unless Lou tells me!

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