Comments | random_flores: FIC: A Little Drop of Poison (Cara/Kahlan) AU

random_flores

FIC: A Little Drop of Poison (Cara/Kahlan) AU - 5/?

Oct 15, 2012 18:02

Title: A Little Drop Of Poison
Author: Misty Flores
Rating: R
Genre: Legend of the Seeker, Cara/Kahlan - Western AU
Teaser: And so it begins, in the darkest hours of the night, in the company of an old man and a killer, Kahlan embarks on the journey to save the life of her dearest friend, and in the process take on the most dangerous gang of outlaws ( Read more... )

fan fic, fanfic:lots

Comments 14

wkgreen October 16 2012, 14:05:36 UTC

Hmmm... hopefully Denna gets to Zedd before the men he is distracting do.

And Kahlan has made a fateful choice now.

Waiting for more :)

random_flores October 18 2012, 21:15:15 UTC

I have a feeling Denna and Zedd are going to be spending a lot of time together. :D Thanks for reading!!

ladycoral October 16 2012, 15:49:31 UTC

Great update!

I loved Cara's charm and how Kahlan seemed overprotective of Cara.

Squeee! Cara and Kahlan are finally going to be alone. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

random_flores October 18 2012, 21:23:37 UTC

They are most definitely going to be alone. :) I'm looking forward to it too.

chickinwhite October 16 2012, 17:52:19 UTC

I´m caught!! I´m not sure if I´ll be able to keep my patience til you´ll update again...
This was awesome! I loved the whole Denna scene. Their dialogues sharp and filled with wit. Amazing chapter!!
I just hope RL will play along and allow you more chapters, like... sooooooon... :)
Thanks!

random_flores October 18 2012, 21:23:57 UTC

Definitely want to try!! I'm having fun with this. Thanks for reading!!

g_ww October 16 2012, 19:53:35 UTC

Excellent chapter.

I do like your Denna, especially the play between her and Cara.

So Kahlan is falling under Cara's spell - and maybe Cara sees it a little too? I wonder what she'll do about it...

random_flores October 18 2012, 21:24:20 UTC

Denna is just so much fun. I can't wait for her to pop up again.

anonymous October 16 2012, 20:52:43 UTC

This story is awesome. The way you are describing Khalan's understanding of her relationship's development with Cara is great. And I also love how you let infer Cara's concern about Khalan.It's Cara, after all, and we can't have her actually showing concern for anybody's comfort, even if it's Khalan's, or specially if it's Khalan's. I just love it.
Now, all things considered, isn't real life a bit overrated? Could you please skip it for a while and update soon? Million thanks in advance, whenever you update.

random_flores October 18 2012, 21:31:47 UTC

LOL, I don't now. I've tried that approach but real life can be a bitch when it wants to be. :) I do love keeping Cara's side of things quiet. She's got a lot going on but damned if she's going to let Kahlan see it quiet yet. :D Thanks for reading!!