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FIC: Free Falling From a Work in Progress - Glee (Brittany/Santana, Rachel/Quinn) - Prologue/7

Dec 12, 2010 09:10

TITLE: Free Falling From a Work in Progress
AUTHOR: Misty FloresEmail: mistiec_flores@yahoo.com ( Read more... )

Comments 10

musicffyou December 14 2010, 01:28:15 UTC

This chapter was amazing! This prologue was so awesome that I'm sending it to my cousins who's in the army to read. I'm sure he'll love the girl on girl stuff lol But more then that, I'm sure he'll love reading a story that starts of so hopeful about going into the army.

"Santana didn't identify with queer, but Brittany did. Brittany, with her obsession with breasts and her hobby of making out with everyone, did it without thinking of any sort of consequences.

Even in crusty old Lima, she was safe.

Because it was freaking America, or whatever, and there were people who fought for that right, to keep her safe.

Thoughts that seemed jumbled and incomprehensible two minutes ago suddenly seemed so very clear.

Brittany, the girl she was gonna marry, had always been her safe place.

Maybe it was time to return the favor"

I love this part :)

random_flores December 15 2010, 19:32:24 UTC

I know a soldier or two, and they really are amazing for the service they've given to this country. I can't admire them enough. I hope he likes it!

meatisadelicacy December 14 2010, 23:16:41 UTC

Okay I have a vagillion things due in less than 7 hours but that did not stop me from starting this. My reward/motivation for getting all my shiot done is reading the rest of this. Lemme tell you, it's going to be hard to do my crap. This is so damn good already. And totally random but awesome, for some reason I was thinking about Team America A World Police (anything to not do my projects/papers, I suppose) but this made me all sorts of happy.

random_flores December 15 2010, 19:34:22 UTC

Team America: World Police is tremendously underrated. :-) Puppet!Porn! ;-)

Hope you got what you needed to get done. :)

malexfaith December 15 2010, 16:45:54 UTC

Holy s**t. I'm totally blown away, tears and all, and it's only the first bloody chapter. I knew this would be amazing, I mean it's written by you isn't it, so of course we'd get nothing but the best. And this prompt is awesome, I'm usually just a R/Q follower but this was calling out to me. Can't wait to read more. Thanks heaps for sharing

random_flores December 15 2010, 19:35:33 UTC

There's plenty for R/Q in the next chapters, I Promise. :-) Thanks for taking a chance!

glittergron June 7 2011, 15:34:36 UTC

I don't think I can do words right now. With my mind officially blown and with a hazy kind of hope, I'll be continuing on to part 1 now. Maybe I can offer a better comment once I've made myself more acquainted with this story.

darkndangel9 June 7 2011, 19:09:49 UTC

hi I think i love you. This prologue is amazing. I love that Santana has that realistic view of being in the military. But even more that she's going to be fighting for their rights. I agree with the first commenter that part was awesome. My brother's in the Navy and it's nice to read a story with a positive view of the military and showing what they do. <3
Onto the next chapter!!