Kiss #5: Droplet

[ran_mouri82]

Title: Droplet
Author: ran_mouri82
Pairing: Kudou Shin'ichi and Mouri Ran
Fandom: Detective Conan
Theme: #29 - the sound of waves
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Detective Conan is pwned by Aoyama Gosho. I only admire his l33t skillz.

Comments

[candy__chan]

That was beautiful. I loved the symbolism and the whole idea of her crying with the rain, and the last lines just WIN ♥♥♥

...and I agree with ladybug-chan. I love and adore Ran, and her loyalty is extremely admirable, but at the same time...the girl really needs to tell Shinichi what's what. Granted, not much he can really do about it, but GAWD! I was proud of her in movie eight for chewing his ass over the radio thing! ...which leads into the "I love you, Shinichi...hey look! Shiny things!" *froths at the mouth*

Also, your disclaimer wins the interwebs :D

[ran_mouri82]

*squeals and glomps* Thankyouthankyouthankyou! I was going for poetic angst without the cheese! *nods sagely*

Somehow, I'm sure Ran has an idea that Shin'ichi can't exactly come home and can't exactly tell her why. After all, she was so perceptive each time she suspected Conan's true identity: a drug must've made him small and he must be hiding out from bad guys. And despite the fact that she would almost love to believe Conan WAS Shin'ichi, that didn't stop her from preparing to chew him out the last time she suspected the truth. She doesn't want a "pillar" between them and was willing to tell him so.

Still, the nuances of their characters and where their friendship even came from are still, by and large, missing. Let's hope Aoyama gains some inspiration from his little dip back into MK!

[candy__chan]

You're quite welcome! *glomps back for good measure*

I understand that...but that movie eight thing still alternates between making me crack up and annoying me. "I love you, Shinichi...lookit the shinies!!" FOCUS, WOMAN!!

[ran_mouri82]

As Ran-chan's no dummy, my Mouri Sense (like Spidey Sense) is telling me she was kinda eager to change the subject. XD *pats Ran-chan*

And sadly, Sonoko's not much better. "Oh, Kid's bad and ditched us! Wait, so he was trying to help us? Ooh, I knew that hunka man wouldn't let us down!" (Alright, I threw in the "hunka man" part, but still!)

[candy__chan]

But--but--it's the moment the fans have been waiting for!!

*giggle* I saw hunka-man, and what popped into my head was from Kung-Pow: Enter the Fist when the girl loudly declares "Take me, man-meat!" *is shot*

[ran_mouri82]

<.<

>.>

*shoots u* XD

[candy__chan]

*is ded--for reals*

[ran_mouri82]

Oh! You should know YOUR funny disclaimers were the inspiration. No joke! Not like I was going to settle for "No own no sue", but you blazed the trail for disclaiming with style! ^^

[candy__chan]

D'awwww...thank you! *laugh* Wow, it makes me happy to know that someone actually notices those things, 'cause I do put a whole five seconds of thought into coming up with a disclaimer for each of my challenges!

Thanks, hon ♥

[ran_mouri82]

Hey, it's the little things that can make a difference. You're quite welcome! *luffs on icon--I mean, joo* ^^

[candy__chan]

:D :D :D

...I feel totally loved now, let me tell you ^.~