Just for fun, I thought I'd post the original versions I have of my contest 'fics. Merry might kill me, but I've always found it interesting to look at how stories evolve and change, and how useful it is to have a good beta. Or, in this case, three of them:
raynos,
hallowd (SPLICES! CONTRACTIONS!) and
hecatehatesthat all chipped in on this one.
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The possible dreams of Rukia )