[Fanfic] The Shadow and the Knight

[ramadiii]

Title: The Shadow and the Knight
Fandom: Rookies
Pairing: Aniya Keiichi/Yagi Touko
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, drama
Length: 3214 words
Disclaimer: I love my characters but unless I can get one of them for Christmas this year, I don't own any of them.
Summary: ”You can't have a light without a dark to stick it in.” - Arlo Guthrie (1947- )
A/N: My first

Comments

[cwazy_weiven]

That was some really sweet Yagi/Aniya. Good job.

A few things though; Yagi actually calls Aniya Kei-chan, instead of his full first name. And an interesting thing to note that Aniya has never actually referred to Yagi by her name throughout the whole series. But seeing as they're childhood friends, I'd expect him to actually call her by her first name when they're alone together.

Good first story though. But now I have to go and stare at something blank for a while. White font on black background look really terrible on my screen @_@

[ramadiii]

Hihi! Thanks for thinking it's sweet <3
There is a meaning behind everything I write ;)
The reason why Yagi calls Aniya, Keiichi when she's mad is because she thinks it's ridiculous to call someone -chan when they argue, and besides, it make more of an impact, don't you think? I also noticed that he never calls her anything but even though he obviously has feelings for her he's too proud to let her in on it by calling her by her first-name.
Even, and especially, when they're alone together :P

Don't know how much sense that makes but that's what I think xD
Hihi, the white font might not be the best but you should have seen in the beginning when I used neon-green! *rolls around on the floor* it was straight out horrible to look at!

PS. I added you as a friend btw, I hope you don't mind ;)
Thanks for reading, means so much to me!

[cwazy_weiven]

That's even more point for you then. Nowadays people always tend to half ass their writing. They write for reviews but can't be bothered to do a decent job about it. But obviously this was well thought out and more power to your for it.

I actually understood exactly what you said :D And about the neon green...wow. You would have never gotten a review from me in that instance. I would have passed out half way while reading. Even now I had to copy everything into word to read it without getting a headache.

No problem. More friends with similar interests welcomed! I added you back bb.

[ramadiii]

Hehe, I just like to create little twists here and there but they can be kinda hard to get sometimes :P
Really? Is it that bad? Never really thought about it, I tend to get headaches if the font is black on white background, too bright for me. Guess it goes both ways, right?

Yay! I have a new friend <3 That means I'm not a stalker or a serial-killer, right? Sorry, just checked out your journal a little =3

[cwazy_weiven]

I was actually thinking about the name thing during my hour hiatus. I think because in Japan calling someone by their first name is kind of a big deal and it shows just how close Yagi and Aniya really are. I think it would have made a bigger impact, to us and especially to Aniya if Yagi had just called him Aniya or Aniya-kun. Using his surname and/or the respectful -kun at the back would imply something of a barrier between them, especially since calling him Kei-chan seems to come second nature to her.

Yes it's that bad. Just writing this reply I have to glance quickly to the phrase I want to reply to. The white font just jumps out at me and I see stars when I look away.

LOL obviously not. But do you really know that 'I'm' not one? >D

[ramadiii]

Hm.. That's very true, never thought of that :S

Wow, then replying on this page must be a bitch, huh? *hihi*
Very true.... Are you?? *runs and grabs a pitchfork from the nearest cupboard*

[cwazy_weiven]

I'm on my brother's laptop now, and really it's just my computer colour that's screwed up. You page on my brother's screen looks just fine.
Hehehe ~I'll never teeeeell~ >D

[cwazy_weiven]

Btw, I posted my other Rookies fic if you wanted to know ;D

[ramadiii]

I saw! Just commented on it ;) It was.. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

[cwazy_weiven]

Thanks bb <3

[ramadiii]

Oh, good! Started getting worried there for a while ;)
Ehh? then... *grabs the pitchfork a little harder* I guess we'll just have to wait and see what you are...
*Hihi*

[cwazy_weiven]

~I'll never teeeeeeell~