Comments | ralst: FF: One Night Stand

ralst

FF: One Night Stand

Aug 21, 2008 23:45

Fandom: Original
Pairing: F/F
A/N: This is not in any way connected to my ongoing story. Thanks to Ann for the beta.

( One Night Stand )

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Comments 10

mercurychkita August 22 2008, 02:48:35 UTC

This was really sweet, in a reluctant sort of way... which makes it all the better!

ralst August 22 2008, 15:40:10 UTC

Thanks.

rymi47 August 22 2008, 05:21:55 UTC

wonderful!

ralst August 22 2008, 15:40:21 UTC

Cheers

newbie_2u August 22 2008, 14:33:28 UTC

I really enjoyed that! It was so adorable how she would say the opposite of what she was thinking and then mentally berate herself... Looking forward to more!

ralst August 22 2008, 15:40:49 UTC

No more for these two, I fear, but more of other stuff I'm sure.

anti85 August 22 2008, 16:18:27 UTC

funny how some people manage to make you forget the rules no matter how hard you try to remember. and suddenly they've made themselves a major part of your life...
great portrait (or, at least i hope that's the word i'm looking for... tricky language:p)

olli01a August 29 2008, 15:26:06 UTC

I like this a lot.

I hope you will continue the story about the two porn actresses soon. Til now I only read the first part.