FF: A Lift to the Wedding

[ralst]

Fandom: Voyager
Pairing: B'Elanna/Seven
A/N: A response to P&P's turbo-centric affair and an attempt to write something without relying on dialogue. Not beta'd.

Comments

[newbie_2u]

It might not have been the wedding everyone else was expecting, but lying there on the floor of the turbolift, B'Elanna fulfilled her promise to end the day as a married woman.

That was bloody brilliant!!!!

An amazing blend of comical and sensual all wrapped in a tight little turbolift.

Nicely done!

[ralst]

Thanks. I have missed the ol' turbolift.

[ralst]

Do you need me to write a note for teacher? *g*

[gsrfan7]

"It might not have been the wedding everyone else was expecting, but lying there on the floor of the turbolift, B'Elanna fulfilled her promise to end the day as a married woman."

Lol, well I guess that'll work too!

[ralst]

I hope so.

[rpickett77]

I enjoy reading your stories a lot. They're always well-written, clever, and fun/playful. Was this the one that you asked the smut question about?

If so, good job. It didn't come across as all that smutty to me, and it didn't come close to triggering my "scroll through that part" button. :)

[ralst]

Thanks. Nope, this was nothing to do with the smut question, just a quickie I wrote while watching the telly.

[runetraverse]

*happily cheers* I love it! Seven seems a bit more formal/Borg-ish than in most fics, and the change fits quite well. As always, you've got great wordchoice and imagery. And you managed to make a turbo-lift story seem fresh and new. Great job. ^^

[ralst]

Thanks. One of the things I always loved about Seven was the formality of her speech, so I'm glad it came across.