[Cable & Deadpool] Good Intentions (1/?)

[rallamajoop]

Remember that other-C&DP-story I kept talking about writing during those last couple of bits of Dogs of War and kept asking questions for? Well, this would be it.

Title: Good Intentions
Summary: Deadpool thought killing that 'Nathan' guy was going to be a fairly routine job. He couldn't have been more wrong.
Chapter: 1/?
Characters/Pairing: Cable/

Comments

[flight_wo_wings]

“What are you, his Dad?”

Oh my GOD. I...I think I'm in love with you now. And to think I just came back here to get my nightly dose of porn...

[rallamajoop]

Hee, I was hoping someone would spot that line. ^_^ (There are actually quite a few little bits like that hidden in this chapter - but the rest probably won't stand out until I have gotten a bit further with the plot.)

[flight_wo_wings]

I always have respect for someone who can pull off good foreshadowing, especially when you're writing the story as a serial like this. It's really not as easy as it looks. XD

[rallamajoop]

XD Oh, I don't think that line even counts as real foreshadowing - not when Tyler Dayspring Summers is canon fact. Like most of Deadpool's lines it was thrown in for laughs (and, if later, it turned out to have relevance to how things unfolded, what the hey). What CopyCat said to Cable in part 4 - now that was foreshadowing. Or at least, it was meant to be.

[flight_wo_wings]

Yeah, but see, you didn't say that, so to the uninformed it looks like foreshadowing. It works on both levels, which is awesome.