The Gratuitous Vampire AU - Part 4

Aug 19, 2009 21:03

Title: Sign of the Cross (a.k.a. the Completely Gratuitous Guilty Gear Vampire AU)
Summary: Gears or vampires, it's all just another day's work for the Holy Order. But they never do quite manage to screen some of their more unusual recruits as carefully as they ought to either.
Characters/Pairing: Sol/Ky
Chapter: 4 of 5
Rating: NC-17
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fic, things that are velithya's fault, guilty gear

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rallamajoop August 20 2009, 10:15:14 UTC
I am so much more comfortable writing dialogue/snark than I am writing smut, it probably shows. ^^; (I seriously considered skipping straight to the morning after until I came up with enough important dialogue that would be exchanged during this scene that it became kinda necessary.) Though it's just as true that scenes like this are so much more fun to plot out (and hopefully so much less likely to end up wallowing in bad porn/doujinshi cliches) if you can work a bit of in-character playfullness into them. ^_^

Errors fixed, thanks for pointing those out. My beta reader got to see a couple of draft copies of this before it was finished, so we were probably both a bit too familiar with it to spot all the mistakes by the end. ^^;

Since the end of the second chapter, I'd been wondering if Sol biting Ky would automatically convert him into a vampire, but I guess that isn't a concern now :D

Oh, no - Ky would have been *very* much more worried if there'd been any danger of that - and for that matter, Sol would've been a lot more reluctant to bite him at all. I guess I haven't found anywhere to address that directly in the text, but I have a big preference for versions of the vampire-mythos where making someone into a vampire is a at least a little more complicated than getting bitten once.

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