The Gratuitous Vampire AU - Part 4

[rallamajoop]

Title: Sign of the Cross (a.k.a. the Completely Gratuitous Guilty Gear Vampire AU)
Summary: Gears or vampires, it's all just another day's work for the Holy Order. But they never do quite manage to screen some of their more unusual recruits as carefully as they ought to either.
Characters/Pairing: Sol/Ky
Chapter: 4 of 5
Rating: NC-17
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Comments

[yhibiki]

Wow. Tbat was... really hot.

Especially loved the exchange between them, about Sol's fantasies and whether or not he would have told Ky. Poor lonely Sol.

... I just hope Sol wasn't sneaking into Ky's room at night to watch him sleep!

[rallamajoop]

Thanks! I'm still pretty new at writing these scenes, enthusiastic feedback is very encouraging. =D

Especially loved the exchange between them, about Sol's fantasies and whether or not he would have told Ky. Poor lonely Sol.

Interesting you noticed that part, it was one of my main excuses for including this scene in detail. The previous chapter already covered the smut requirement fairly well, but those kind of conversations are, y'know, important for plot reasons and stuff. *cough* Plus I figured most readers wouldn't mind another chapter like this.

... I just hope Sol wasn't sneaking into Ky's room at night to watch him sleep!

*snort* Oh, the image you just gave me. XD I don't think I ever linked it to the comm, but I'm so horribly guilty of going there already. ^^;;; Fortunately, in this particular universe I think Sol would be more inclined to stick to more traditional/less stalker-ish methods of dealing with, er, shall we say Ky-induced frustration. Starting fights is far healthier and time-honoured method. ;)

[yhibiki]

I have an EYE for these things. ;) Well, and... I love smut, but I really love little details that show the emotional involvement of characters as well. Which I certainly felt, so good job. :)

... oh lol. sparkle!Ky makes a little too much sense. Although I'm pretty sure Sol would beat him up if he ever stepped into her room uninvited.

You've also given me an image of vamp!Sol going out of his way to pick a fight with Ky when he's ~frustrated~, and Ky being so incredibly confused as to what sets Sol off sometimes.

[rallamajoop]

That's very much what I was going for too, glad it came through well. ^_^

Although I'm pretty sure Sol would beat him up if he ever stepped into her room uninvited.

That or invite him closer. ^_~ Actually, I suspect Girl!Sol would be the kind to booby-trap her window, which would lead to her waking up in the middle of the night at the sound of a spring going, to find Sparklepire!Ky hanging in a net outside frantically going off, "This isn't what it looks like!" She'd probably find that hilariously funny, and/or prime blackmail material.

You've also given me an image of vamp!Sol going out of his way to pick a fight with Ky when he's ~frustrated~, and Ky being so incredibly confused as to what sets Sol off sometimes.

Ahaha, can't you just picture Sol picking fights because, say, he just walked in on Ky getting changed? Or because he's been walking around in a wet shirt after a particularly sudden rainstorm? Poor Ky, there's just no logic at all to what sets Sol off. *g* On the other hand, who's to say only vampire!Sol does that? ;)

[yhibiki]

Lol, if they're both picking fights due to frustration, the rest of the order will probably just avoid them altogether. "Oh shit, Sol Badguy is heading this way and Commander Kiske just finished his workout! RUN!"

Or they can be taking bets as to who officially "starts" the fight.

I would love for girl!Sol to meet Bella and/or Edward. I'm pretty sure she'd have some hilarious things to say to them. ;)

[rallamajoop]

Ky probably tends more towards utter denial than violence - unless it's just the regular kind of frustration. On good days, they both get to take it out on a convenient army of Gears instead, but the enemy just won't always schedule attacks when you need them to, and of course, some days getting all hot and sweaty in close contact with each other isn't going to help with the frustration all that much... ;)

I would love for girl!Sol to meet Bella and/or Edward. I'm pretty sure she'd have some hilarious things to say to them. ;)

Probably just a mute stare of disbelief. Then maybe she'd set her radioactive lizards on them just for the hell of it.

[janegray]

That or invite him closer. ^_~ Actually, I suspect Girl!Sol would be the kind to booby-trap her window, which would lead to her waking up in the middle of the night at the sound of a spring going, to find Sparklepire!Ky hanging in a net outside frantically going off, "This isn't what it looks like!" She'd probably find that hilariously funny, and/or prime blackmail material.

Since you have been giving so much thought on this, why don't you actually write a GG parody of Twilight? It would be hilarious! Best fic ever!

Pretty please? ^^

[rallamajoop]

You may have missed a relevant link up above. ^_~

[janegray]

No, I've seen that link. But I mean, won't you write an actual fic? Not just a description of girl!Sol and sparkle!Ky and five snippets, but a thousand-words-long fanfiction.

I still say it would be the best fic ever :P

[velithya]

BELIEVE ME, I HAVE TRIED ;_;

[janegray]

Milady, I'm starting to think that you are a Heaven-sent force of goodness.

[velithya]

Trufax: every time I start a sentence with "you should write a story where-" she just starts TUNING ME OUT. It is VERY SAD and TOTALLY UNFAIR.

<.

[rallamajoop]

ONLY BECAUSE I CANNOT HEAR YOU OVER THE SOUND MY SKULL IS MAKING AGAINST THE DESK. I KNOW YOU ONLY DO IT TO HURT ME. :(

DON'T MAKE ME THREATEN TO MOVE THE TIME TRAVEL FIC BEHIND THAT LOM/DW CROSSOVER I'VE BEEN TOYING WITH.

NEW ICON? ;P

[velithya]

EITHER THAT OR OVER THE SOUND OF YOUR HYSTERICAL LAUGHTER

SOMETIMES I AM SERIOUS OKAY :<

OMG NOOOO I WILL BE GOOD*

*for like a whole hour

Not that new, but I've mostly been using it over at a certain comm so far

[rallamajoop]

I AM DEVELOPING A BAD TWITCH REFLEX. TWENTY YEARS FROM NOW SOMEONE WILL INNOCENTLY SAY 'YOU SHOULD WRITE SOMETHING' IN MY HEARING AND THEY WILL HAVE TO TALK ME DOWN OFF THE ROOF.

AND SOMETIMES IT IS VERY HARD TO TELL.

what?! I am not even seeing you in the next hour!

PS, posters are ordered!

I like it!

[velithya]

nawww well perhaps I will only save it for special occasions then ;P

noooo, but I will be good just the same! ;P

WOOHOO! \o/