A Dawning Sense of Peace - Sean and Elijah tribble - PG13

Oct 09, 2008 19:28

Title: A Dawning Sense of Peace
Rating: PG-13 - Just for slashiness
Pairing: Sean Astin/Elijah Wood
Prompt: Noise

This tribble flows from the two which preceded it, ' Hitting the Limit' and ' They Danced in Silence'. These have been hard to write and invoked painful emotions... but I felt I couldn't leave things where they were. Unbetaed... so all ( Read more... )

troubled tribbles, s&e tribble, sean and elijah

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rakshi October 10 2008, 09:28:30 UTC
You're so right! And.. that's why he had to speak. Hope Elijah understands.

Love...

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primula_baggins October 10 2008, 00:55:59 UTC
"Sean’s stomach twisted with repugnance at the thought of allowing someone else… anyone else… entry into the intimate world he shared with Elijah. This world was precious to him… and private. Not for public viewing or private condemnation."

Not anymore, baby! But...oh, how true that he'd want to protect this sacred love from condemnation of others.

I like that he began to feel peace once he confessed. Good writing, Rak, and very hard emotions TO write, I'm sure.

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rakshi October 10 2008, 09:28:01 UTC
Truly hard to write... but they end up being powerful tales for such short stories. Glad you liked it... thank you!

Love...

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althea_lady October 10 2008, 02:36:18 UTC
This is powerfully written, especially the last two lines.

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rakshi October 10 2008, 09:27:08 UTC
Thank you, sweetie. Hard stuff to write.. but potent.

Love..

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aprilkat October 10 2008, 03:54:33 UTC
This is very perceptive, about how something so painful can begin acceptance and healing. But - ouch.

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rakshi October 10 2008, 09:26:41 UTC
Yeah.. these have been painful to write. Don't know how I got off on this track.

Love..

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telstar_gold October 10 2008, 09:13:41 UTC
oh, painful. But I think he did the right thing by telling her.

I wonder what Elijah's reaction will be...?

Great stuff, thanks!

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rakshi October 10 2008, 09:26:09 UTC
I think he did the only thing Sean COULD do.. being Sean. And yeah.. what will Elijah say? I have to ponder that one. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

*hugs*

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