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julchen11 January 20 2007, 01:13:05 UTC
I read it once, twice, I don’t know how often I read this chapture. This story has it all: joy, excitement, desperation, anxiety, disappointment, sadness and so much love and emotions.
*sigh*

It’s funny to see Elijah fussing around. The house is stunning and perfect for them as with Viggo to speak - this house is a DREAM!

“For years that emptiness had driven him... yearning for fulfillment yet not knowing what was needed to nurture that dry and thirsting portion of his soul. “

Aww, I’m melting, sweetie. Very touching and so emotional.

Elijah sank back on the couch, feeling his own eyes burning. ’What is WRONG with me?’ he thought. ‘I’ve only made things worse!’

Poor Elijah, he only wants to help. I can SEE him, sweetie, sitting with Christine on the sofa. He looks so very desperate and sad. *sigh* This part nearly kills me .

Sean being mad with Elijah?

“Feeling lost and totally alone, Elijah turned onto his side and stared despondently at the wall.”

This kills me, too…

““Did you have any doubts that we would?” Sean asked. “Forgive each other and move on, I mean?”

“Not really, no. Last night felt pretty fucking bad though.”

I could feel this, too, sweetie.
What a story, lovingly, gorgeous, amazingly written. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

I’m glad I’m so much behind, so I haven’t to wait for the next part *smiles*

Love you
Judith

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rakshi January 20 2007, 01:59:41 UTC
Ah, my sweet lady, I've been WAITING for you to show up. Nothing on earth equals your wonderful feedback. I'm thrilled that you like the story, and hope the rest of it touches your heart as I think it will.

Love you much...

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