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rakshi June 22 2011, 19:55:47 UTC
Yep. There's a lot going on all at once. I'm glad you're enjoying the story... and I thank you from the heart for commenting.

Love..

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carolina30363 June 22 2011, 19:54:53 UTC
awwwwwwwww...second part...best thing in my day.

I love how they are involved and trying to her their friends and family even if they are exhausted and stressed:
Love the dialogues too.

Can't wait for next part!!!!

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rakshi June 22 2011, 19:56:24 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story... and I'm very grateful for your comment.

Love...

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addie71 June 22 2011, 22:59:04 UTC
Wow, things just went from bad to worse to worse yet. And, while Elijah, understandably wants the part in the play, he really isn't ready to take on a project that big, nor commit to something that could very well affect Sean and their relationship if it runs too long. Poor guys. I have a feeling things are going to get even worse.

Is it Wednesday yet?

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rakshi June 22 2011, 23:16:47 UTC
Awww.. sweetie.. bless you. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And I really appreciate the comment. I think you may be right that things could get worse... we'll see.

Love...

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verangel June 23 2011, 11:11:51 UTC
oh wow. Not good. I understand Elijah wanting to do this but he is causing so much stress on himself and his relationship. At the end I felt sad at the way Elijah reacted to Sean. The pool scene however was fantastic and oh so hot. I am looking forward to the next part. This is such a wonderful story. They do seem so real. hugs you xooxoxo v

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rakshi June 23 2011, 12:32:18 UTC
thank you so much, sweetie. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying the story and very grateful to you for commenting.

More to come!!

Love...

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telstar_gold June 23 2011, 22:37:29 UTC
Uh oh, trouble brewing. They've got a lot to deal with, haven't they? So many intriguing threads in this story, it's really grabbing me!

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rakshi June 24 2011, 02:22:04 UTC
So many intriguing threads in this story, it's really grabbing me!

That's great! More to come! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for commenting.

*hugs*

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