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[Fanfiction] Oregon, part 2/?

Aug 29, 2009 13:23

Title: Oregon, part two
Author/Artist: lokichan2004
Character(s) or Pairing(s): England/America
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: LIVE BIRTH, look away if that isn't your cup of tea or coffee. Also human names, but this should be the least of your problems with this chapter.
Summary: Oregon was born a bit premature.

( Let's try this again. )

oregon, america, !fic, england

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geogirl15 August 30 2009, 15:47:19 UTC

Eee, can't wait to see the rest of this!! <3 It's really great so far!

geogirl15 August 30 2009, 15:51:14 UTC

Ok, right after I posted this the rest of the chapter got up, so I can now leave a more detailed comment.
I'm actually really scared for both Al and Oregon. I mean, I know they'll be ok in the end, they have to be, but I'm still scared for them.

Vermont is absolutely adorable, being able to step up and help out like that. And Arthur, poor Arthur...at least he was here for this one.

And I think I agree with you on the 13 colonies as not being Al's kids. I mean, I write them as his kids, but it makes little sense.

lokichan2004 August 30 2009, 17:15:23 UTC

Ok, you saw it? The rest of it? Because it's not there anymore. Goddamnit, LJ ate what I typed last night and now I have to redo it! >:C

geogirl15 August 31 2009, 12:44:28 UTC

Yeah, I saw it...do you need help getting it back? I can tell you what I still remember...

lokichan2004 August 31 2009, 16:00:56 UTC

No; I re-typed it and everything's as it should be. :)

geogirl15 August 31 2009, 16:37:25 UTC

:D oh, that's great!! I'm glad it didn't put you too far back.

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