Crit Post

Jan 02, 2014 23:03

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hmd, ooc, concrit

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godisachild May 29 2011, 03:17:40 UTC
Hey there. I'm James, and I play Pokey Minch, who'll be the next person hunting Vayne down. As he's managed to kill his first opponent, he's managed to regain his spider mech. Which currently doesn't have any weapons since those'd be extra regains, but it can still smash and crush crap really good.

As for Pokey himself, his right shoulder is broken, and he's feeling guilty about having killed someone for the first time, which has taken him off guard and confused the hell out of him.

So. Wanna plot how this might go down?

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raisedbyacat May 29 2011, 03:49:37 UTC
Oh yes! Vayne is... well, he's really an easy target. The most he's doing is sticking to Flay at home and hoping everything ends soon.

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godisachild May 29 2011, 03:52:01 UTC
Which isn't going to help Pokey's conviction at all. Which'll further confuse him, considering how vicious and heartless he'd like to pretend he is.

So I guess we should decide if it actually ends with either dying.

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raisedbyacat May 29 2011, 03:56:50 UTC
I don't mind Vayne dying, logically it would make sense as he has no means of defending himself or fight. I think it would depend on how Flay may react on what might happen to Pokey.

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godisachild May 29 2011, 04:34:31 UTC
Logically, Pokey has a very, very small chance of surviving this event. I actually wouldn't mind him getting killed and failing to kill Vayne. However, I would like him to get the chance to let slip that the reason he's doing this is because he's afraid of someone else getting punished and that he isn't doing something for purely selfish reasons for once. So if he can last long enough to let that slip, it'd be great.

There's also the chance a friend of Pokey's might be coming along because of how injured Pokey is, but I gotta go to bed so if we can plan the details of that possibly happening tomorrow it'd be great.

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raisedbyacat May 29 2011, 04:42:25 UTC
I see no reason why that couldn't happen.

And yes tomorrow would be perfectly fine.

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godisachild May 29 2011, 16:39:01 UTC
Okay. So a few things.

Before I go about any of the ideas of Pokey having his friend follow/come with him, I need permission. Pokey's friend, Lil Slugger, isn't actually in the event and thus possesses all his regains, which include some fairly massive strength/speed and a secondary monster form. Because of this, I wanted to make sure it would be alright if he showed up to begin with.

Secondly, I'm curious if you could tell me how Flay would fight/what his powers are, so I know if he'd do something like go for an instant kill on Pokey, or just try to beat the hell out of him to get to try and get him to go the hell away, or what. Because if it isn't an instant kill and Pokey just gets severely injured, it might end with Slugger's involvement just being getting Pokey out of there and them retreating at the end instead.

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lunawolves10th May 29 2011, 17:28:16 UTC
Actually, even non-involved people have lost their regains for the course of the event, I checked this with the mods.

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godisachild May 29 2011, 18:46:05 UTC
Ah, then my mistake, I missed that. Slugger is just a kid who's good at beating people with a baseball bat, though he'll still probably come with Pokey if allowed.

Sorry. I had thought non-involved kept them. That's my bad.

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raisedbyacat May 29 2011, 21:19:07 UTC
So, I guess no one has regains at the moment, but other people are still perfectly fine to have along!

I'm not sure if Flay has any abilities back yet, he usually fights with a sword but he's a pretty big and strong guy, at least compared to Vayne. I doubt Flay would be out to kill and Vayne won't want him to anyway so even though Pokey would be after Vayne, Vayne would still try and make for situation where no one had to die (or let himself die if it meant everyone else was okay).

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godisachild May 29 2011, 21:26:37 UTC
COOL. from what Slugger-mun said, Slugger will fight to defend Pokey if things get bad but otherwise help him out of there. He'll only get insanely aggressive if Pokey dies. So there's a chane this'll end in a standstill, with Pokey retreating after getting hurt bad enough. Pokey for his end has a fairly high tech weapon, but he could still be injured if knocked off it.

We want to plan for a standstill then, with Pokey attacking, maybe hurting Vayne, then getting hurt by Flay, then Slugger defending Pokey and the two of them leaving without Vayne dying?

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raisedbyacat May 29 2011, 21:39:33 UTC
That works for me if it does you.

They should be holding up at their house so it shouldn't be hard to find them.

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godisachild May 29 2011, 22:09:02 UTC
Okay. Do you want to make the initial post, or should I?

Also, I hope I don't seem too controlling. I'm honestly up for anything and just throwing out suggestions. If there's anything you'd like tohappen or suggest, please let me know.

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raisedbyacat May 30 2011, 00:17:05 UTC
You're not being controlling at all! Honestly I'm really open to anything as I have no specific plans for Vayne and pretty much just intend to go with the flow of events.

Either is fine, I can make it. Would you prefer a normal post or a log?

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godisachild May 30 2011, 04:29:46 UTC
OKay just want to make sure I haven't been forcing anything.

SO I guess the flow is Pokey shows up, attacks Vayne, Flay arrives attacks Pokey, Slugger shows up, gets Pokey, they leave.

Either is good with me. I can do any. Just post me a link here when you make it.

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raisedbyacat May 30 2011, 06:54:13 UTC

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