My cruddy poem

Feb 18, 2010 18:27

Well... I don't know, maybe it isn't crappy.  My Japanese isn't that great (I keep slacking off on studying the language).  Wrote my first haiku actually in the Japanese language though.

My original poem:
Ume tenraku
fuwatto mama yuki.
Kaishi izumi.

English translation:
Plum blossoms fall
drifting as snow.
Spring begins.

It's a step that I was actually able to write it directly, right?  Even the times I've butchered the Spanish language trying to do poetry, I had to write down my general english idea first...  And this was in my head actually in Japanese so...  How bad is my grammar? >.<

Just... had to do something, having trouble reading.

japanese, poetry

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