Comments | rainingforyears: in-progress: desire line (spooks/noir)

inflightdata in rainingforyears

in-progress: desire line (spooks/noir)

Apr 22, 2012 00:36

Fic amnesty? I need to just have time to sit down and get this hammered out. Sigh.

desire line
Spooks/Noir; Beth, Ruth, Kirika, Mireille
904 words, PG

Three snapshots. Visions, and nightmares.

( you don't have to be alone )

noir, spooks

Comments 2

delgaserasca April 21 2012, 14:40:26 UTC

I don't know the other source material but I love how you convey so much with so little. Love the atmosphere in here. Everything seems dark and smoky and laden.

(RANGEFINDER GDI.)

inflightdata April 23 2012, 10:24:44 UTC

eeeee! Thanks, hon. I'm really looking forward to getting stuck into this proper once I have some spare time, oh God.

(I COULDN'T RESIST.)