50 je-prompts: #043. share

[raining_helium]

rating/genre: PG, AU, fluff, romance
pairing(s): Ohmiya, side Sakumiya and Juntoshi friendship (sorry Aiba!)
words: 2059
summary: Nino is sixteen and busking. Ohno begins his art stall across from him, and that won’t do (also the story in which Nino starts writing love songs).
disclaimer: fiction.
notes: 16/19 y/o romance. Inspired by this gorgeous

Comments

[neenashareefa]

From the title I can of have the feeling that this would be a very romantic and fluffy fic and there I'm right.

[neenashareefa]

And the song... I could never sing the chorus it's too long for my brain.. but Nino would do perfectly well...

[raining_helium]

Hehe what can I say, fluff makes the world go round. Nino probably has trouble too!

Thanks for reading :D

[misekeith]

This was so perfect. There aren't many things I love in the world as much as young Ohno and Nino, but the way you managed to write about them is SPECIAL.
Nino's witty songs, the slow but humorous way tou build the story up until the precious "Knew you'd catch up."
And Ohno with his silky hair who does CERAMICS (that was pretty precious too).
I admire the way you managed to keep it light form beginning to end, not even an hitch (...and this is also unbetaed, serious congratulations).

I've been waiting for a bit for someone like you to come to this fandom. You made my day, just wanted to tell you that.

[raining_helium]

gah you're too kind ♥ I have too many feelings for young Ohmiya, so I'm glad you liked it!
We all know there's silky hair underneath all that hairspray! And he would totally be getting in his mum's way, making ceramics in his kitchen and trying to bake them in the oven.
Well I would really benefit from a beta, but thank you anyway :)

YOU MAKE MY DAY! thanks for reading!

[morninglights]

Your writing is so so enjoyable to read. You just use the right words in the right places and it's more like I experience your story instead of simple reading ♥
I couldn't stop staring at that picture for a while and with that in mind, your story was even more beautiful. Street musican!Nino AU's are one of the best AU's there is, seriously.
Also, your Ohno is adorable. I loved his straightforwardness. And Nino's songtitles. God, his titles. I loved every single one of them and I can so picture a sixteen year old Nino writing about just that.
But it's not just his titles, it's also yours. You have adorable and unique fic-titles and it's just one more thing I really like about your fics.
I'm so happy you started writing Arashi (and Ohmiya, that is) fic and please, don't ever stop, okay? ♥

[raining_helium]

Oh, thanks so much, for reading and commenting again! It's kind of why I prefer present tense, it's more natural to write and feels more immersive.
Isn't that pic lovely?? I need more street musician Nino in my life tbh, there's never enough.
Nino probably likes him because he's so straightforward (because Sho looks at everything Nino does uncertainly). Glad you like the titles, I had fun with them and Nino would definitely be bordering on pretentious when he's sixteen.
So much ♥ for you, I care about titles too much so that means a lot to me!

btw thanks for being so awesome with the gonna-stepandgo scanlation comm, I'm originally from manga/anime fandom so doujinshi for Arashi just makes me feel warm inside and stuff ♥

[morninglights]

Yes, I actually discovered my liking for present tense rather recently, but since then I definitely prefer it too. For reading and also for writing. I think you're just a little bit closer to the story because everything actually happens right now. ♥
There should be more Nino with guitar in general, tbh. If it wasn't for Ohno, this one would definitely be my OTP. Yes. Nino/guitar totally counts as a pairing :D

Oh, thank you now, I'm happy that you recognized me, since that means that you remembered my username :) That makes me really happy. And there are so many lovely doujinshi out there which just have to be shared, especially those adorable Ohmiya ones, so. No problem. ♥ (I've been in the manga/anime fandom before Arashi as well, so I know what you mean)

[raining_helium]

Exactly my thoughts on present tense :3 Though I've been trying to see if I can write in past for the heck of it and it's actually difficult so I think people are either past or present writers :o
YES Nino/guitars is a great, underrated pairing. I mean, he has three and calls them siblings, if that's not love I don't know what is ♥

hehe it's no hardship on my part to remember you ;) All that Ohmiya doujinshi ♥

[ministryofbees]

You don't know how much I love you. No idea at all. <3

*places a My-Number-One-Top-Favourite-Fic-Writer-Of-All-Time sash and tiara on you*

Oh, and I try to restrain from commenting on all your fics because then I'd be crossing the line of onine stalking. 8DDD

[raining_helium]

Oh, you're too wonderful!! I so happy you enjoy my writing so much. All my fics?? My gosh the older ones are pretty cringeworthy, hope it wasn't too bad haha. Go ahead and stalk lol

Thank you for coming again, means a lot ♥

[ministryofbees]

WHEEEE~!!! <3

Oh, and can I friend you? *sparkly eyes*

[raining_helium]

Of course! Don't need to ask :D

[patorisia]

cute :P
and Nino song's titles killed me :D

[raining_helium]

Thanks! I had fun with the titles :)