50 je-prompts: #021. near

[raining_helium]

rating/genre: PG, fluff
pairing(s): Ohmiya
words: 740
summary: Nino is calculating, Nino is enamoured, Ohno reads minds.
disclaimer: fiction.
notes: when I say fluff I mean fluff. also i wrote this before the other prompts so it is a little terrible.

I noticed I loved you when we were an inch apart

Comments

[morninglights]

You, girl, you write beautiful Ohmiya, okay? OKAY? Gosh, that was adorable. Way too adorable for such simple things like ... words or anything.

And this last line, you know, it's a bit devilish, but I'm sure you're totally aware of that and just love to tease us readers here.

God, beautiful. I tell you. Please do write more of this, okay? ♥

[raining_helium]

Oh, you're too wonderful <3 I'm happy you think so, because Ohmiya doesn't deserve bad fiction.

Haha, it was too perfect not to end there ;) I like when you can fill in the blanks.
(though I'll be honest and say I'm probably not good enough to write the continuation!)

Thanks!

[ylunio]

aaaaaaaaaw <3

First of all, I LOVE THE TITLE <3
And you are so full of grace when you write, really. I think you chose a very nice layout for your blog too because it's snowy and delicate somehow, with all that white, and it matches with your writing perfectly.

I love how you wrote them here. How Ohno is, in fact, much more aware of everything than Nino.
I love it :)

I can't wait to read more from you!

[raining_helium]

YAY you like the title! I think a bit too hard about titles so I'm ecstatic you appreciated it :D
How lovely of you to say, my writing is so rusty and blah right now though :O
Hehe I just wanted a layout to show off the content without hurting my eyes, but maybe it's setting the tone for my writing lol.

Ohno is a sage.

Thanks!

[patorisia]

kawaiiii :D ahh neen is teasing Riida, as usual :D It's cute story, i like it!!!
Thanks!

[raining_helium]

Thanks for reading! hehe Nino wouldn't be himself without teasing Leader ;)

[moimoikurabu]

pretty <3 and oh so smooth sailing. How you write is easy to follow and understand. AND: In my opinion, the ending was perfect <3

[raining_helium]

Thanks for reading :) I'm glad you found it easy to read, usually I'm a bit long winded lol.
It was my perfect ending too <3

[kiriezero]

I loved it! ♥ it's perfect! ^--^b
your Nino is so... Nino! XD I liked his bratty lines XD
and the end... ♥ you don't say it but we know what happens next! I like that "..." feeling :D
thank you for sharing it ♥

[raining_helium]

Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed reading! I tried to make Nino in character, but it's quite hard.

Thanks for reading!