SG-1 FF: Propositions (1/1)

[raindroproses]

Title: Propositions

Author: raindroproses

Rating: PG (or K+, or whatever the hell they're calling it these days. Anyway, there's no smut.)
Category: Angst, Romance, OT4
Pairing Grouping: Sam/Jack/Daniel/Teal'c

Comments

[azarsuerte]

*giggle* That was cute. My favorite lines were:

After, of course, ordering Atlantis Base to return and being summarily ignored.

and

Jack pelted him with berries and told him to stop being trite.

*scrambles back to work on her story*

[surreallis]

Very nice! I could really see it happening this way. You did some great justification there and made Jack properly reluctant, but agreeing in the end. And Sam got quite snarky when she didn't have those military regs hanging over her anymore, didn't she? Heh!

I was very happy to read this before work today. :)

[susan217]

Jack pelted him with berries and told him to stop being trite.

LOL. How very Jack.

Nicely done.

[joran]

Oh, this is great! Sad, but sweet and natural.

Jack still looked like a deer in headlights. Daniel sighed.

Hee.

[wisdomeagle]

Yay! A safe-for-work story!

Lots of great lines -- your writing is witty and fast-paced and fun.

They weren't sleeping together--he certainly would've noticed that

I should hope so. :p

Daniel Jackson, in particular, had a difficulty metabolizing it, and acted in ways that were out of character

*g*

Being incorporeal for a year had helped him appreciate the more fun aspects of the human body.

*smirk*

He'd thought Jack was too straitlaced (or, rather, too straight)Nice. I like the way the point of view shifted too -- there weren't obvious transitions but it still made sense, how you'd go into one close pov, then zoom out, then zoom in on someone else. It worked very well (and I'm fascinated by how everyone is dealing with the multiple points of view involved in a three-plus-some