[FIC] Warmth

Apr 03, 2010 00:14

Name: Warmth
Pairing: Junseung
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Drama, Angst?
Summary: Hyunseung didn't know what else to do. He's fought it for so long but he can't anymore...He needs to see him
Wordcount: 1,752

Comments: Written on the first night of spring break. I got the the inspiration suddenly  on a rainy ride home from school when the song : "Need you ( Read more... )

pairing: junseung, rainbowtongues, fanfiction: oneshot, b2st, rating: pg-13

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 04:16:34 UTC
Spot for momof!

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momof April 3 2010, 04:43:16 UTC
This is what makes LJ stalking a rewarding thing to do! Imma be back and read this later after my mom's done yelling at me *sighs*

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 04:46:12 UTC
eep! Im sorry to hear that!

*dabs eyes and waves hankerchief* be strongg my dear ;_;

and...then come read ahaha

(btw you're a really good stalker! I posted this like..10 minutes ago)

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momof April 3 2010, 05:19:53 UTC
*plays Superman theme music ( ... )

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 05:34:10 UTC
Omo! That was a long comment! I LOVE long comments, lets me know that you actually read it and payed attention, means alot ( ... )

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momof April 3 2010, 05:58:56 UTC
Writing long comments is my forte. That is when i actually feel like doing so lol After all, a long comment is only a mere result of a satisfying read. So again, you should know that this fiction is plain great.

And yeah I figured it out that most emotional writings were written w/ much thoughts of how it'd be going. It's all about following your inspiration and just writing what's in your mind instead of planning it out. Still, I;m glad that you didn't get too worked up and end up writing too much. Just that one sentence at the end is enough. I srsly love that simple sentence.

Aww, I think I need to rush back to wanpanda's LJ and re-read her fic because you've suddenly made me feel like I'm in need of more JunSeung! Have you ever thought of a multi-chap? *blinks*

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 06:10:39 UTC
aw! I feel even moreee special now haha. Im so glad you liked it. I imagined both you and wanpanda reading this during editing it, so I'm happy you're satisfied. 1/2 of my main quota is met hahaha

I wanted to wrap it up short and sweet, something that revealed that Junhyung loved him, but was unsure, while still leaving it open for an impression of their life going on after that part. Sort of like capturing a story from the middle and leaving it open ended. So i'm very very happy you appreciated it :]

haha Agogogo! She's an awesome writer! I still need to read the lasst chappy of her ficc >_< haha ( ... )

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momof April 3 2010, 09:07:40 UTC
lol I understand your reasons. After all, those were the exact same reasons why I quit writing fan-fics for good. Like I came across a particular song and got overwhelmed with so much inspriration that I rushed and started writing a fic right away. But then the feelings died out way before I even finished writing half of the story. So I just left it there because I could only write fics when I wanted to, not when I forced myslef too.

And as much as I love to read your fics, I have to say that I hate it when authors take long pauses. I'm not a patien reader even though I sound like one and when I'm in love w/ someone's writing, I can only keep asking for more which is quite annoying for both sides. So if you ever start a long fic and leave it at some crucial part and make me wait for too long, I will def kick and scream!

But I don't mean that you shouldnt try writing a long fic in the future. Cuz I know I'll love it and as long as I love it, I can endure the waits :)

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