sex maniac faces, super sex beasts, and super pleasure sex.
This is what happens when I and tobaccowhispers combine forces and comment on a JRock bad fic.
Aoi walked at the Shibuya district alone. Nothing was attracting his view at all. Well, he didn’t have money, of course he’s not come to school anymore as he just said to Uruha he’ll work and Uruha couldn’t do anything about that since Aoi was no longer having interest to study. When he’s thinking about Uruha, he felt lonely because Uruha was not there with him; it’s been 3 days he didn’t meet Uruha and he started to miss his lover. He really wants to hug and kiss the honey- blonde so badly but his lover just said never comes back until Hideaki was totally gone.
rainbowtongues: Even at this point, a paragraph in, I have no clue what's going on with Uruha, and Aoi and his lover Uruha, and Uruha some more. I think it might have something to do with the horrible verb tenses, lack of sentence structure, and the fact that Uruha is always Uruha (instead of...oh, I don't know. He, Him or some other singular pronoun)
tobaccowhispers: I was totally unware that pronouns did not exist and that you must use the name Uruha at all times. Wowza. The run-on fail made me jizz my pants a little. Grammatical and punctuation fail.
Aoi sighed why Hideaki was coming this time and disturb the moment between him and Uruha? Thanks to Hideaki, he and Uruha can’t have foreplay, blowjob or anything related to sex as usual. Well, by having a sex, that’s showed how much Aoi loves Uruha, not because he’s perverted.
rainbowtongues: I thought Aoi was walking alone? Wait no, I was certain of it because "it’s been 3 days he didn’t meet Uruha." Yeah. There it is, in almost indiscernable english, but there none the less.
tobaccowhispers: (please note the fail effected rainbowtongues' brain.) Well, aren't blowjobs technically foreplay? If you can't have foreplay or blowjobs, then there isn't really a point to having sex, now is there? I'm totally confused at this point because apparently, by having a sex, Aoi showed how much he loved Uruha(no, never him or he or his lover. . .just URUHA) and not just because he's perverted. . .wait whaa-- first of how do you have a sex? Is that some new Karma Sutra shit? I might check that out. YES, ONLY PERVS HAVE SEX. I was totally fooled by normalcy.
“Hisashi buri, Aoi chan. XD” A voice called. Aoi stopped, his body was dazed badly. He felt a trauma approached him. He started to sweat as he knew the voice and he’s even knew the perfume’s smell. He turned around and that’s right Hideaki already stood behind him; looking to him with a perverted face, no it’s actually sex maniac face; that’s suit more to him. Aoi quickly walked faster; tried to run away from Hideaki.
rainbowtongues: Why describe Hideaki's facial expression when you can use a STUPID XD EMOT. (and last time i checked, xD was not "sex maniac face"). Just sayin`.
tobaccowhispers: I'm 90% sure, people don't know what the hell Hisashi buri means, translation note needed. OH GOD, THE TRAUMA. IT'S LIKE A TSUNAMI~~. Rather than running, Aoi became a dog and sniffed, isn't Aoi the smartest? BUT WAIT! He gets smarter, turns around and BAM! There's Hideaki, with a sex maniac face. . .OH GOD NOT A SEX MANIAC~WOWZA!!! So somehow, Aoi's the shit cause he walked and ran at the same damn time.
“Wait, Aoi chan~ Why you run away from me?” Hideaki called.
rainbowtongues: Maybe it was your "xD Sex Maniac Face"
tobaccowhispers: -thick ass Chinese restaurant lady voice- HE RUN CAUSE YOU SEX MANIAC.
“All people in the world will run away if there is sex maniac following them and stop calling me Aoi chan! That’s gross!” Aoi said with a scary voice, he’s quickening his speed.
rainbowtongues: GRAR SCARY VOICE *imagines something kin to a raspy zombie growl crossed with a deep narrative barritone*
tobaccowhispers: Yet, people carry on with their normal day. . .except you Aoi, except you. Speaking of people, where they go?
“Well, actually I’m not sex maniac.” Hideaki smirked as he also following Aoi from behind. Aoi cursed in his heart when he found the other was so fast. He bet maybe the dark hairs was always go to gym and so on.
rainbowtongues: Followed Aoi from behind? Ohhh okay, as opposed to following someone from the front. Thanks for clearing that up for me.
tobaccowhispers: Yesyes, follow him from the front Aoi. Cause that's how we also follow people. Ouch. Cursed in his heart? Your heart has a mouth? You must that epic terminator heart, yo heart go hard. .
“Then, if you’re not sex maniac, who are you anyway?” Aoi tried to delay the time by talking with Hideaki, so that the other didn’t increasing more speed anymore.
rainbowtongues: He's Hideaki. You know that very well. You felt trauma approached you remember?
tobaccowhispers: NO. HE'S A BIRD. He's Hideaki, durrh. Trauma, perfume, did I mention sex maniac face?
“Of course I’m super sex beast. (^3^) They called me like that. Even Reita said that to me. Ah~ I’m just test his cock only, I’m almost came hard to him, but he ran away from me, so sad.” Uruha pouted as he increasing his speeds again.
rainbowtongues: -_-;; more emots goddamn. Description fail.
Awhh, Uruha's pouting! Oh wait...Hi Uruha, when did you get here again..or at all? Oh my God! And now! Not only is he here! But Increasing Speeds. AGAIN!
tobaccowhispers: Super sex beast? . . .that's high debatable. Ahh. . .You just test his cock? Does it have erectile dysfunction? Or maybe he has testicaluar cancer? Will this be the JRock version of that one episode of Degrassi? You came hard to him? So your cum has super abilites and Reita was the target. . .while he ran? . . .I see. Oh and hey Urupooon~~
“Fuck off! You don’t have to tell me the details! Stop, don’t chase me or I’ll kill you!” Aoi can’t hold anymore as he started to run like a tiger. But, that’s only makes Hideaki more excited as the other also started to run fast; chasing the raven hairs.
rainbowtongues: Don't kill your lover Aoi! Or is Uruha magically Hideaki again?
Run like a tiger? You mean like on all fours, because that's how tigers run. Just sayin. Oh, and about this "Raven Hairs," Is he someone accompanying Aoi on this journey? Or is he a wig with legs?
tobaccowhispers: One comment. We are now tigers. GERWAR!
“You want to kill me? I don’t think so because I knew you will ran like a horse if I stop. By the way, Aoi chan, if you don’t stop, I’ll chase you and eat you when I get you, but if you stop, I’ll not disturb you and Uruha anymore and I’ll teach you the best technique to have the greatest sex with my brother.” Hideaki offered.
rainbowtongues: Run like a horse? Okay so now we're in a gallop. But wait a moment "I knew you will ran like a horse if I stop." Has he stopped? Are you running like a horse, or will you run? or have you ran? how long have you been running?! I'M CONFUSED!
Ouch, and now there's cannibalism. Which I will note, Is frowned upon in most societies. And uhm...question. Why does Hideaki know the best technique to have the greatest sex with his brother?
tobaccowhispers: -as stated above.-
And of course, Aoi stopped suddenly. He turned his head to Hideaki that already stopped chasing him. The other smirked while the raven looked to him with wondering face.
rainbowtongues: Of course Aoi stopped suddenly. Because when someone threatens to eat me, I'd stop, and instead of being fucking terrified because he'd actually eat me, I'm going to want to know the best tequnique to have the greatest sex with my lover.(All the while, not wondering why Hideaki knows this in the first goddamn place)
tobaccowhispers: I told you. . .Aoi is the smartest. . .cause someone threatens to eat him and he stops. . .mkay.
“Really? You didn’t lie?” Aoi asked with curious face; want t know if that’s true.
tobaccowhispers: Totally not gonna, ask any normal questions. For example, why he's fucking his brother/your lover, why he's offering you sex advice about fucking your brother, or why your tigress abilities have failed you and you are now horse?
“Of course, good and I’ll teach you the greatest way to having a sex with my brother.” Uruha showed his thumb finger and smirked naughtily.
rainbowtongues: HO SHIT! IT'S URUHA! So now he's gonna tell Aoi how to have sex with.....Hideaki? But doesn't this defeat the aforementioned purpose? Nomatter, Uruha is showing his thumb finger so it's all good...Wait. I thought the thumb wasn't even a finger? What freak sixth appendage does Uru-daeki have? Just sayin'
tobaccowhispers: Guess Uruha was lying to you the entire time. IN REALITY. AOI YOU WERE BUTTSCHMEXING HIDEAKI AND URUHA HAD HIS -deep voice here- SEX MANIAC FACE.
“Er,..What’s the technique anyway?” Aoi asked; his head turned to another view; he’s in blushing mode.
“Here.” Hideaki took off something from his pocket. It’s pink, had a chain and fur.
rainbowtongues: Welcome back Hideaki.
rainbowtongues: Ooo a gift, And it's pink and had chain and fur. *incert picture here* Why in the world would you take the time to describe the gift (and maybe better your writing abilities)whenn...YOU CAN JUST SHOW A PICTURE! My brain is numb from the description fail. “Hand cuff?” Aoi frowned. He wondered what that pink handcuff was related with having good sex with Uruha.
tobaccowhispersNo dumb ass, it's a circle that's metal and locks. Oh and it's big enough to fit around your wrist.
“Ssh..It’s not an ordinary hand cuff. It’s pink and has a fur and this can make you and Uruha having a super pleasure sex. I guarantee.”
rainbowtongues: Ooo a gift, And it's pink and had chain and fur. *incert picture here* Why in the world would you take the time to describe the gift (and maybe better your writing abilities)whenn...YOU CAN JUST SHOW A PICTURE! My brain is numb from the description fail.
tobaccowhispers: Nonononono. Cause all handcuffs are not made up of the same basic structure at all and the addition of pink and fur just make it so damn grand. SUPER PLEASURE SEX -echoes- sexsexsexsexsex. . .Doesn't it sound like a bad American porno or an English dubbed hentai? Super pleasure sex, does that mean something like this: click
“How to use it?” Aoi’s question was totally causing the other burst a huge laughter.
rainbowtongues: Aoi...*facepalm* how do you use handcuffs my dear?
tobaccowhispers: As if the word hand and cuffs aren't obvious enough, lets be stupid and ask what their function is.
“You are perverted than me but you didn’t know how to use it? So pity lol~.” Hideaki tapped Aoi’s shoulder making the other glared to him with mad eyes. “Okay, okay, read this book and you will be a pro in short time. By the way, enjoy and don’t worry I will not disturb you guys tonight~.” Hideaki gave a chuu to Aoi making Aoi almost dropped his jaws.
rainbowtongues: Did I just see 'lol'....yes...yes I did. This fic just went from crapshit, to fermenting horse waste. (ouch..was that too bold?) And now Aoi almost dropped his jaws! Last time I checked, you only had one jaw...What the hell does Aoi look like in this fic? ....mommy I'm scared. Or maybe, he was just holding a copy of the movie. Who knows. I don't, and I'd put money on the fact that the writer doesn't either.
tobaccowhispers: . . .Aoi's mouth must look like 50 Cent's.
“Ew~That’s too..Ew! He must planning go to that freak noseband apartment. He’s gross.” Aoi mumbled to himself. He looked at the book and the hand cuff. He smiled naughtily.
rainbowtongues: Can inanimate objects own apartments now..or are we talking about Reita?
tobaccowhispers: Why yes, yes they can because apparently, Reita is now reduced to being a freak noseband. As if being a noseband isn't bad enough, let's add the freak is and make Reita sound like a monster inanimate object.
Tonight you will be mine, I will not allow your brother disturb us.
tobaccowhispers: Aren't you in for a shock worse that URU-DAEAKI'S SEX MANIAC FACE.
He’s a perverted by the way, he admit that. Suddenly, Aoi got a messages; he knew that’s from Uruha anyway. He looked at the message and showed disappointed and mad face at the same time.
rainbowtongues: Showed disappointed and mad face at the same time? Maybe Aoi's using his second jaw to help him accomplish that.
tobaccowhispers: This is only an accomplishment that Aoi can be proud of. So we have Tiger Aoi, Horse Aoi, Terminator Heart Aoi, Slow Aoi, Unafriad Aoi, Birth Defected Aoi, and now, Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde Aoi, ain`t this some shit? I`mma need him to get some help on this.
‘Oh I’m forget to tell you. Tonight, I will go out with my brother. So, you can’t do sex with him By the way, please don't hate me. (^人^) - Hideaki'
rainbowtongues: Wait I thought Aoi was certain that this text was from Uruha? But it's from Hideaki! The return of Uru-daeki! and...incest? yey?
tobaccowhispers: This is some super sci-fi fic because Uruha got amazing powers. You know, those powers that causes him to become his INCEST LOVING BROTHER. “Hideaki!!!! You cheat me!!! Come back here!!!” Aoi yelled and chased Hideaki that already ran away from him.
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rainbowtongues: And once again, Aoi is unfazed that Hideaki is going out with his own brother. BUT to each his own. I would like to note, that this fic impaired my ability to be grammatically literate..@_@. So I apologize for my typos. And, that I didn't even understand what the fuck even happened in this fic, until I read it for the second time. Sadly enough, this fic was followed by comments about how great it was, while I sat wanting to shoot myself in the face to make the pain stop. The poster for this fic wasn't bad. In fact, I liked it...too bad it couldn't be followed by something understandable or worth reading. Honestly, I'm not a heartless bitch, I'm just allergic to horrid fiction and this was a crash and burn *cue mushroom cloud*. This has been rainbowtongues, signing off.
tobaccowhispers: I've become brain dead because of this. Overall. . .this fic. . .was. . .that's all that needs to be said.
Aoi walked at the Shibuya district alone. Nothing was attracting his view at all. Well, he didn’t have money, of course he’s not come to school anymore as he just said to Uruha he’ll work and Uruha couldn’t do anything about that since Aoi was no longer having interest to study. When he’s thinking about Uruha, he felt lonely because Uruha was not there with him; it’s been 3 days he didn’t meet Uruha and he started to miss his lover. He really wants to hug and kiss the honey- blonde so badly but his lover just said never comes back until Hideaki was totally gone.
rainbowtongues: Even at this point, a paragraph in, I have no clue what's going on with Uruha, and Aoi and his lover Uruha, and Uruha some more. I think it might have something to do with the horrible verb tenses, lack of sentence structure, and the fact that Uruha is always Uruha (instead of...oh, I don't know. He, Him or some other singular pronoun)
tobaccowhispers: I was totally unware that pronouns did not exist and that you must use the name Uruha at all times. Wowza. The run-on fail made me jizz my pants a little. Grammatical and punctuation fail.
Aoi sighed why Hideaki was coming this time and disturb the moment between him and Uruha? Thanks to Hideaki, he and Uruha can’t have foreplay, blowjob or anything related to sex as usual. Well, by having a sex, that’s showed how much Aoi loves Uruha, not because he’s perverted.
rainbowtongues: I thought Aoi was walking alone? Wait no, I was certain of it because "it’s been 3 days he didn’t meet Uruha." Yeah. There it is, in almost indiscernable english, but there none the less.
tobaccowhispers: (please note the fail effected rainbowtongues' brain.) Well, aren't blowjobs technically foreplay? If you can't have foreplay or blowjobs, then there isn't really a point to having sex, now is there? I'm totally confused at this point because apparently, by having a sex, Aoi showed how much he loved Uruha(no, never him or he or his lover. . .just URUHA) and not just because he's perverted. . .wait whaa-- first of how do you have a sex? Is that some new Karma Sutra shit? I might check that out. YES, ONLY PERVS HAVE SEX. I was totally fooled by normalcy.
“Hisashi buri, Aoi chan. XD” A voice called. Aoi stopped, his body was dazed badly. He felt a trauma approached him. He started to sweat as he knew the voice and he’s even knew the perfume’s smell. He turned around and that’s right Hideaki already stood behind him; looking to him with a perverted face, no it’s actually sex maniac face; that’s suit more to him. Aoi quickly walked faster; tried to run away from Hideaki.
rainbowtongues: Why describe Hideaki's facial expression when you can use a STUPID XD EMOT. (and last time i checked, xD was not "sex maniac face"). Just sayin`.
tobaccowhispers: I'm 90% sure, people don't know what the hell Hisashi buri means, translation note needed. OH GOD, THE TRAUMA. IT'S LIKE A TSUNAMI~~. Rather than running, Aoi became a dog and sniffed, isn't Aoi the smartest? BUT WAIT! He gets smarter, turns around and BAM! There's Hideaki, with a sex maniac face. . .OH GOD NOT A SEX MANIAC~WOWZA!!! So somehow, Aoi's the shit cause he walked and ran at the same damn time.
“Wait, Aoi chan~ Why you run away from me?” Hideaki called.
rainbowtongues: Maybe it was your "xD Sex Maniac Face"
tobaccowhispers: -thick ass Chinese restaurant lady voice- HE RUN CAUSE YOU SEX MANIAC.
“All people in the world will run away if there is sex maniac following them and stop calling me Aoi chan! That’s gross!” Aoi said with a scary voice, he’s quickening his speed.
rainbowtongues: GRAR SCARY VOICE *imagines something kin to a raspy zombie growl crossed with a deep narrative barritone*
tobaccowhispers: Yet, people carry on with their normal day. . .except you Aoi, except you. Speaking of people, where they go?
“Well, actually I’m not sex maniac.” Hideaki smirked as he also following Aoi from behind. Aoi cursed in his heart when he found the other was so fast. He bet maybe the dark hairs was always go to gym and so on.
rainbowtongues: Followed Aoi from behind? Ohhh okay, as opposed to following someone from the front. Thanks for clearing that up for me.
tobaccowhispers: Yesyes, follow him from the front Aoi. Cause that's how we also follow people. Ouch. Cursed in his heart? Your heart has a mouth? You must that epic terminator heart, yo heart go hard. .
“Then, if you’re not sex maniac, who are you anyway?” Aoi tried to delay the time by talking with Hideaki, so that the other didn’t increasing more speed anymore.
rainbowtongues: He's Hideaki. You know that very well. You felt trauma approached you remember?
tobaccowhispers: NO. HE'S A BIRD. He's Hideaki, durrh. Trauma, perfume, did I mention sex maniac face?
“Of course I’m super sex beast. (^3^) They called me like that. Even Reita said that to me. Ah~ I’m just test his cock only, I’m almost came hard to him, but he ran away from me, so sad.” Uruha pouted as he increasing his speeds again.
rainbowtongues: -_-;; more emots goddamn. Description fail.
Awhh, Uruha's pouting! Oh wait...Hi Uruha, when did you get here again..or at all? Oh my God! And now! Not only is he here! But Increasing Speeds. AGAIN!
tobaccowhispers: Super sex beast? . . .that's high debatable. Ahh. . .You just test his cock? Does it have erectile dysfunction? Or maybe he has testicaluar cancer? Will this be the JRock version of that one episode of Degrassi? You came hard to him? So your cum has super abilites and Reita was the target. . .while he ran? . . .I see. Oh and hey Urupooon~~
“Fuck off! You don’t have to tell me the details! Stop, don’t chase me or I’ll kill you!” Aoi can’t hold anymore as he started to run like a tiger. But, that’s only makes Hideaki more excited as the other also started to run fast; chasing the raven hairs.
rainbowtongues: Don't kill your lover Aoi! Or is Uruha magically Hideaki again?
Run like a tiger? You mean like on all fours, because that's how tigers run. Just sayin. Oh, and about this "Raven Hairs," Is he someone accompanying Aoi on this journey? Or is he a wig with legs?
tobaccowhispers: One comment. We are now tigers. GERWAR!
“You want to kill me? I don’t think so because I knew you will ran like a horse if I stop. By the way, Aoi chan, if you don’t stop, I’ll chase you and eat you when I get you, but if you stop, I’ll not disturb you and Uruha anymore and I’ll teach you the best technique to have the greatest sex with my brother.” Hideaki offered.
rainbowtongues: Run like a horse? Okay so now we're in a gallop. But wait a moment "I knew you will ran like a horse if I stop." Has he stopped? Are you running like a horse, or will you run? or have you ran? how long have you been running?! I'M CONFUSED!
Ouch, and now there's cannibalism. Which I will note, Is frowned upon in most societies. And uhm...question. Why does Hideaki know the best technique to have the greatest sex with his brother?
tobaccowhispers: -as stated above.-
And of course, Aoi stopped suddenly. He turned his head to Hideaki that already stopped chasing him. The other smirked while the raven looked to him with wondering face.
rainbowtongues: Of course Aoi stopped suddenly. Because when someone threatens to eat me, I'd stop, and instead of being fucking terrified because he'd actually eat me, I'm going to want to know the best tequnique to have the greatest sex with my lover.(All the while, not wondering why Hideaki knows this in the first goddamn place)
tobaccowhispers: I told you. . .Aoi is the smartest. . .cause someone threatens to eat him and he stops. . .mkay.
“Really? You didn’t lie?” Aoi asked with curious face; want t know if that’s true.
tobaccowhispers: Totally not gonna, ask any normal questions. For example, why he's fucking his brother/your lover, why he's offering you sex advice about fucking your brother, or why your tigress abilities have failed you and you are now horse?
“Of course, good and I’ll teach you the greatest way to having a sex with my brother.” Uruha showed his thumb finger and smirked naughtily.
rainbowtongues: HO SHIT! IT'S URUHA! So now he's gonna tell Aoi how to have sex with.....Hideaki? But doesn't this defeat the aforementioned purpose? Nomatter, Uruha is showing his thumb finger so it's all good...Wait. I thought the thumb wasn't even a finger? What freak sixth appendage does Uru-daeki have? Just sayin'
tobaccowhispers: Guess Uruha was lying to you the entire time. IN REALITY. AOI YOU WERE BUTTSCHMEXING HIDEAKI AND URUHA HAD HIS -deep voice here- SEX MANIAC FACE.
“Er,..What’s the technique anyway?” Aoi asked; his head turned to another view; he’s in blushing mode.
“Here.” Hideaki took off something from his pocket. It’s pink, had a chain and fur.
rainbowtongues: Welcome back Hideaki.
rainbowtongues: Ooo a gift, And it's pink and had chain and fur. *incert picture here* Why in the world would you take the time to describe the gift (and maybe better your writing abilities)whenn...YOU CAN JUST SHOW A PICTURE! My brain is numb from the description fail. “Hand cuff?” Aoi frowned. He wondered what that pink handcuff was related with having good sex with Uruha.
tobaccowhispersNo dumb ass, it's a circle that's metal and locks. Oh and it's big enough to fit around your wrist.
“Ssh..It’s not an ordinary hand cuff. It’s pink and has a fur and this can make you and Uruha having a super pleasure sex. I guarantee.”
rainbowtongues: Ooo a gift, And it's pink and had chain and fur. *incert picture here* Why in the world would you take the time to describe the gift (and maybe better your writing abilities)whenn...YOU CAN JUST SHOW A PICTURE! My brain is numb from the description fail.
tobaccowhispers: Nonononono. Cause all handcuffs are not made up of the same basic structure at all and the addition of pink and fur just make it so damn grand. SUPER PLEASURE SEX -echoes- sexsexsexsexsex. . .Doesn't it sound like a bad American porno or an English dubbed hentai? Super pleasure sex, does that mean something like this: click
“How to use it?” Aoi’s question was totally causing the other burst a huge laughter.
rainbowtongues: Aoi...*facepalm* how do you use handcuffs my dear?
tobaccowhispers: As if the word hand and cuffs aren't obvious enough, lets be stupid and ask what their function is.
“You are perverted than me but you didn’t know how to use it? So pity lol~.” Hideaki tapped Aoi’s shoulder making the other glared to him with mad eyes. “Okay, okay, read this book and you will be a pro in short time. By the way, enjoy and don’t worry I will not disturb you guys tonight~.” Hideaki gave a chuu to Aoi making Aoi almost dropped his jaws.
rainbowtongues: Did I just see 'lol'....yes...yes I did. This fic just went from crapshit, to fermenting horse waste. (ouch..was that too bold?) And now Aoi almost dropped his jaws! Last time I checked, you only had one jaw...What the hell does Aoi look like in this fic? ....mommy I'm scared. Or maybe, he was just holding a copy of the movie. Who knows. I don't, and I'd put money on the fact that the writer doesn't either.
tobaccowhispers: . . .Aoi's mouth must look like 50 Cent's.
“Ew~That’s too..Ew! He must planning go to that freak noseband apartment. He’s gross.” Aoi mumbled to himself. He looked at the book and the hand cuff. He smiled naughtily.
rainbowtongues: Can inanimate objects own apartments now..or are we talking about Reita?
tobaccowhispers: Why yes, yes they can because apparently, Reita is now reduced to being a freak noseband. As if being a noseband isn't bad enough, let's add the freak is and make Reita sound like a monster inanimate object.
Tonight you will be mine, I will not allow your brother disturb us.
tobaccowhispers: Aren't you in for a shock worse that URU-DAEAKI'S SEX MANIAC FACE.
He’s a perverted by the way, he admit that. Suddenly, Aoi got a messages; he knew that’s from Uruha anyway. He looked at the message and showed disappointed and mad face at the same time.
rainbowtongues: Showed disappointed and mad face at the same time? Maybe Aoi's using his second jaw to help him accomplish that.
tobaccowhispers: This is only an accomplishment that Aoi can be proud of. So we have Tiger Aoi, Horse Aoi, Terminator Heart Aoi, Slow Aoi, Unafriad Aoi, Birth Defected Aoi, and now, Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde Aoi, ain`t this some shit? I`mma need him to get some help on this.
‘Oh I’m forget to tell you. Tonight, I will go out with my brother. So, you can’t do sex with him By the way, please don't hate me. (^人^) - Hideaki'
rainbowtongues: Wait I thought Aoi was certain that this text was from Uruha? But it's from Hideaki! The return of Uru-daeki! and...incest? yey?
tobaccowhispers: This is some super sci-fi fic because Uruha got amazing powers. You know, those powers that causes him to become his INCEST LOVING BROTHER. “Hideaki!!!! You cheat me!!! Come back here!!!” Aoi yelled and chased Hideaki that already ran away from him.
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rainbowtongues: And once again, Aoi is unfazed that Hideaki is going out with his own brother. BUT to each his own. I would like to note, that this fic impaired my ability to be grammatically literate..@_@. So I apologize for my typos. And, that I didn't even understand what the fuck even happened in this fic, until I read it for the second time. Sadly enough, this fic was followed by comments about how great it was, while I sat wanting to shoot myself in the face to make the pain stop. The poster for this fic wasn't bad. In fact, I liked it...too bad it couldn't be followed by something understandable or worth reading. Honestly, I'm not a heartless bitch, I'm just allergic to horrid fiction and this was a crash and burn *cue mushroom cloud*. This has been rainbowtongues, signing off.
tobaccowhispers: I've become brain dead because of this. Overall. . .this fic. . .was. . .that's all that needs to be said.