[One Shot] Promise

Dec 22, 2010 06:29

Title: Promise
Group: Hey!Say!JUMP
Characters: Yabu/Takaki + Hasshi
Genre: Slight angst, friendship, romance
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 6700
Disclaimer: This is purely fiction.
Summary: Best friends from the orphanage, Yabu was adopted at 15, leaving Takaki behind (who had fallen in love, oh the tragedy). Yabu promised to come back for him, but with a new life ( Read more... )

r: pg, p: takaki/yabu, g: hey!say!jump, oneshot

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hikarinoniji December 22 2010, 05:30:03 UTC
Spot for crazy_otaku911!!

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crazy_otaku911 December 22 2010, 05:52:52 UTC
Okay, so like... uhm. What were you even worried about? XD OMG
LIKE. SO CUTE.
♥♥♥ MAJOR CUTE

So much heart break and laksdj;falsdkfj; asldfkjalsdfjk; asldkf;a and there were lines I just loved and I've already spazzed about this to you but omfggggaslkfj.

I like all the little jokes. Like the 'bush' and Hasshi and ommmmmmmmmmmg.

There were some lines. That I just loved and the ending. THE ENDING. NO IT'S NOT NICE TO KICK HASSHI OUT OF HIS ROOM BUT WHO THE EFF CARES, SHUT UP AND KISS ME NOW, DAMMIT.

*spazzes around* SO CUTE. HE WAS KNEELING. AND THE CONFESSIONS. AND ALL THE TIME BUT IT ONLY TOOK A FEW WORDS FOR HIM TO JUST UNRAVEL.

THE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE. I CAN FEEL IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT.

Omfg, Archie, I LOVE YOU. ♥♥♥

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hikarinoniji December 24 2010, 23:14:30 UTC
I-- just.. ;o; I'm glad you like it Rinnie ♥ I really was scared you'd might hate it, so really your comment; ♥♥♥

I STILL FEEL BAD FOR KICKING HASSHI OUT THOUGH DX BUT IT'S BEST FOR HIM WHEN HE'S NOT THERE WHEN THEY ARE TOGETHER!

I love you moar~ ♥

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mailnosecret December 22 2010, 05:59:39 UTC
I'm not much a fan of TakaBu but aaawww this is so cute and fluffy skdjfh ♥ and the entire setting is so heart warming :')

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hikarinoniji December 24 2010, 23:15:26 UTC
thank you for liking it bb ♥

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littlemelonblue December 22 2010, 06:59:18 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

DFKJSIFJSKDF;AFKSOJGIDFGDFJG

THIS WAS SO CUTE AND HEARTBREAKING AND CUTE AND HEARTBREAKING AND STUFF AND YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN RIGHT?

IFJISUFSOFI

GUUUH, I LOVE YUUYA T_T LOVE LOVE LOVE HIM. AND I WANTED TO KICK YABU FOR LEAVING HIM THAT STUPID BUSH BUT IT ENDED ALL PRETTY AND CUTE AND JUST JDFHSDHFSU PERFECT.

Omg Hassssssssssssssssssssssssssssshhhi ♥ I loved his character xD

I would spam you like I always do but this isn't my fic so XD

So cute ♥

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hikarinoniji December 25 2010, 02:02:59 UTC
I UNDERSTAND YOU IMOUTO. WE ARE FAMILY AFTER ALL SOPSDAS ♥

I HATED YABU WHILE WRITING THIS, NEGL I WANTED TO KICK HIS STICK-ASS. OPDNWNE BUT I'M GLAD IT TURNED OUT WHEN AND THAT YOU LIKE IT DSSB

negl, I loved writing Hasshi he's awesome and his character is so nice and bubbly n__n

I'm glad you liked it bb, you are welcomed to spam my every fic? 8D

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ryotanfan29 December 23 2010, 06:51:02 UTC
awwwww :) Took you long enough Yabu... You kinda deserved being ignore Yabu... lol <3 *hugs Yuyan*

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hikarinoniji December 25 2010, 02:03:34 UTC
Bu's a bit slow with these kinds of things. Haha, but everything turned out fine right? n__n

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aliciaswr December 25 2010, 14:31:01 UTC
“I had to wait for 5 years, shut up and kiss me.”
xD Awesome fic.

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hikarinoniji December 27 2010, 06:12:10 UTC
Thanks bb! 8D

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