house/cameron fic "Hunger" Ch.1
I wrote some Cam!angst. Posted it in House/Cameron as it might eventually develop into that in later chapters.
It's just angsty right now but they all seem bitter over there anyway and I'm as miserable as can be and maybe I'm translating myself through Cam in this. I don't know. But I wrote it and it didn't help me and my fingers still feel shaky, ( Read more... )
It's just angsty right now but they all seem bitter over there anyway and I'm as miserable as can be and maybe I'm translating myself through Cam in this. I don't know. But I wrote it and it didn't help me and my fingers still feel shaky, ( Read more... )
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i love that you only use italics to make a good point, you use them well. You understand punctuation wonderfully, i love the semicolons, and that makes your story easy to read. That's another thing--usually when I'm reading somethng, even something short, i get distracted and come back to it in a few seconds...that didn't happen once--I *had* to keep reading.
This is really great, and I promise that I'm not just saying that. Also, I especially loved how you dealt with the cam/cud convo. Great.
...do we get a sequel? more chapters? lol!
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This is a really powerful start. The idea of Cam having food issues makes sense to me, and this is the only story I have seen deal with that besides my fav story Unfair by naive_eve. Although in that one the issues are far less severe--issues only, not full blown anorexia like this.
I am definitely hooked to read on to the next ch. No question.
Thinking of House, what his in character reaction will be, I am expecting 1) that he knows all about this, you can't hide anything from him. 2) he's going to want to investigate, know the reasons behind it. So I forsee/hope for a lot of him butting into her business.
You are a good writer, not just strong interesting ideas and events, but also quality mechanics and easy to read, great word choice. I remind you that I want you to write a book, and ask if the first chapter is near done yet. Or maybe an outline? Hehe.
Anyways, great start, great work.
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the first chapter. Hope you like the rest too!
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It's kind of a personal question, so don't feel obligated to answer. I was just wondering if you have struggled/are struggling with an eating disorder? I ask this because I am a mostly recovered anorexic and find this a very realistic portrait of someone dealing with it. I appreciate this fic because it does not glamourize the issue.
I've friended you because I love this story and others you've written. If you want, friend me back and perhaps we can talk sometime.
-xtina (themadscriptor)
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I'm happy you enjoy my stories. I would love to friend you, will try to do it soon. Thank you so much for your comment!
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