Fic: Chasing Dreams Pt 11 of 15

[rainbow_romeo]

Title: Chasing Dreams
Part: 11 of 15
Author: rainbow_romeo
Pairing: House/Chase
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: BDSM, implied and explicit sexual actions 
Disclaimer: Not mine, blah
Summery: Dr. Robert Chase thinks that his private life is nobody's business but his own, he also thinks that he's not a masochist. As always House proves him wrong in the most

Comments

[deinde_centum]

I don't know why you think the way you portray House makes him ooc. You didn't turn him into an idiot, sappy and buttery lover trapped in a stupid and ridiculous plot (*cough* mind-numbing hameron fics *cough*). At the beginning you had him focused on solving the puzzle that Chase was and then, when he decided to help Chase with his iusses, he did it out of curiosity considering the whole process a sort of behavioural experiment: this is something House would do. In this chapter he was analizing the reasons behind Chase's actions and just because he wasn't caustic and abrasive as his usual doesn't make him ooc: he can't always be a cinic bastard and he knows when specific circumstances require a different approach

[rainbow_romeo]

I guess I'm just pretty insecure about writing about House. I did some Perry Cox from Scrubs and it was no problem at all even though people always say how hard it is to write his character. I think I just worry about getting House right because I like how he is in the series and I don't want another House in my story, I want HIM (well, just a little more gay^^). But I'm very, very relieved you think he's okay like he is. =) Thank you very, very much for taking the time to comment this explicitly! You inspired me to finally write the last two pages (as soon as I have the time), because I think my ending is even worse in being non-house-ish, but maybe I'm just imagining things there, too =)

[deinde_centum]

You know, I think you should read a real bad!fic to understand how good is the job you're doing!
Even if I saw only few episodes of Scrubs it seems to me that Cox's personality has a lot in common with House's so I can understand how difficult could be to work on his character. Actually it'll be fun to have these two interact and maybe have them compete for Chase :)

[rainbow_romeo]

I think there are a few Scrubs/House crossovers, I thought about that same idea, but since I already have a story planned for as soon as this is finished that won't leave my mind, I don't think I'll try the crossover thing.
I've read some pretty, pretty bad stories, but in my opinion there's always a difference between someone just don't getting it and writing crap and someone getting it and trying to write it, but failing. I don't know, I'm paranoid. ^^ But well, I think I'm going with my House for now. =)

[deinde_centum]

And then there're also people that don't care at all about oocness, distroy those amazing characters and are also proud of their work *sigh* Once one of them, after I pointed out how pointless was to write a fic about a fandom in which you couldn't recognize the characters other than by their name, they answered me saying that for the fic they were writing (pretty stupid, imo) the characters needed to be ooc!
The only good thing of bad!fic are the mst!fic about some of them ^__^
Now, regarding your next fic, is it going to be a House/Chase one?

[rainbow_romeo]

Well, I started writing fanfiction in the music genre, which means real person slash where you can't really ever know the "characters" and there are a lot of possibilities for speculation. You can really write whatever the hell you want, because you know that the way the people you write about present themselves is not necessarily how they actually are. Most of what I wrote then was original fiction without having to choose names (which was good, because I'm crap at that

[deinde_centum]

Interesting but I must confess I'm not fond of Foreman and, hence, of the Foreman/Chase pairing ^^'
I love the friendship between House and Wilson but I can't see them as a couple; instead I love House and Chase's dynamics because their interaction reminds me of the magister/discipulus relationship we had in the ancient Greece and Rome and that's why they works for me as lovers or when they're involved in a father/son relationship :)

[rainbow_romeo]

That's a shame =(
But I see where you're coming from, especially with the House/Wilson thing. It took me a long time and a few very good fics to like the pairing! House/Chase is still my favorite - it's very much like you said, I'm in love with the teacher/student concept so when I watched the first episode of House, the first thing I looked up was if there were any House/Chase fanfictions xD

[deinde_centum]

A while ago I read a fic (and now it's one of my favourite) in which House and Wilson were a couple and they had to take care of Chase who was turn into a six years old: in that case the fic was so well written and the plot was so good I found House and Wilson's relationship pretty credibly. I suppose I can enjoy them together if the story is good and as long as Chase is involved :)

[rainbow_romeo]

Oooooh you read the PLOT device story!! I absolutely ADORE that one (and mostly every story from that author).
I've got a thing for threesome stories with House/Wilson/Chase, which is how I got to reading House/Wilson stories. For some time I thought about turning "Chasing Dreams" into a threesome story, but I couldn't quite do it. If I get a good plot idea, I think I will write one some time after I'm finally finished here.^^

[deinde_centum]

I don't know how many time I've re-read Chase and the PLOT! Its only flaw was the ending because I was all for Chase staying little and living with House and Wilson. In the Stargate fandom there're a lots of fics in wich Daniel is turned into a child but, frankly, I don't like the most of them. Why can't we have more Chase-is-deaged-and-is-living-with-House-and-Wilson stories??? It's unfair :( The only other fic with a mini!Chase is 'Four going to forty' and it's really good.
I too have a soft spot for H/W/Ch fics (as long as Chase isn't used just as a sex toy) and I like the threesome ones from the plot's author but my favourite one about this topic is whiteraven1606 :)
'Chasing dreams' is perfect with only House and Chase but I'd love to read a threesome written by you :)

[rainbow_romeo]

I think we are very much alike in our taste xD I've read all of whiteraven1606's threesome stories about a dozen times - especially "Picture Puzzles". I could read that one a hundred times more... =) And I hate that there's no ending to that one, even though the author already knew it'd be 26 chapters, so maybe it's even already written.. *sigh*
Could you maybe give me a link to the "Four going to Forty" story? I'm not sure I know it, I often forget titles and remember stories by their summaries. ^^
When I woke up this morning I had the idea to let Chase have a kid (a mini!Chase so to speak xD) and run to Wilson for help, because he's running away from someone/something. Wilson's living with House and really wants to help Chase, so there's no way around Chase staying at House's. And well... ^^ I'm not sure yet, but I really feel like writing a threesome story and I'm scarily keen on writing a kid!fic... xD
(Oh and I've finished Chasing Dreams last night! Finally!)

[deinde_centum]

Here's the link (I love this story

[rainbow_romeo]

So I read "Four going to Forty" today and I really, really like it! Thank you for pointing me in that direction, I enjoyed my afternoon a lot ;)
And I spent last night thinking about the threesome idea (since I couldn't sleep anyway) and I'm pretty sure I'm in love with my first scene already, so I guess I'll be starting the fic today or tommorrow. I hope I'll be able to make it as long as Chasing Dreams, that story was my first longer-than-eight-pages-story in english ^^

[deinde_centum]

I'm glad you enjoyed it and you know what? Have a look at this one: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4805204/1/Boomer
Well written, good banter, characters IC, an unconventional OC and an adorable Chase :)

'my first longer-than-eight-pages-story in english'
and a pretty good one! I'm eager to read your next fic and I hope it'll be a long, very long one ^__^

[rainbow_romeo]

That's quite an adorable story, even though I'm not all that much into Chase being eager and over-excited ^^ But once in a while it's very cute to read!

So, have you ever beta-read something? ^^I'd love for you to beta my next story! I'm not sure if you ever said something about being a native speaker, but I don't care too much about that, I'm not a native speaker and I'm able to find pretty much every mistake in other people's stories.. (Also, I generally use a beta just to find out if I wrote something outrageously ridiculous and to talk about the story's progress ^^) Oh and you can say no if you don't want to, no pressure =) (But you'd be able to read before anyone else gets to! xD)