How I Met Your Father: Part One

Jan 31, 2012 19:24


Title: How I Met Your Father
Summary: Ian and Anthony's daughter Laila wants to know how her fathers fell in love.
Ratings: PG for sugar sweetness!
Previous Chapters: None!
A/N: This is told from the point of view of Laila. It is a less formal than previous stories. Any and all critisms and critiques are apprieciated! Enjoy! ♥Rae

Part One

“Daaaaaaaddy!”

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ext_970856 February 1 2012, 02:35:40 UTC
awwwwww i LOVE the p.o.v and this is coming from ur last series i'm guessing? or something like that right? if it is different then i wanna know toooooo!!!!! don't make me beg while having a tentratrum << i don't even know if thats possibly but i will find a way. I'M WANT TO MARRY YOUR WRITING TALENTS OMG ITZ AAAAHHH-MAZIIIINNNGGG <3 <3 XD

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raeofthestage February 1 2012, 03:16:01 UTC
yeah this is my latest seriers that I've started!!! and my writing talents accept your propsal for marriage ;)

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ext_970856 February 1 2012, 03:21:36 UTC
no no i mean in the ending of you last series Ian and Anthony had a baby girl is this coming from that or is the story of there love different from your last series

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raeofthestage February 1 2012, 04:40:20 UTC
OOOOOH! No this is completely different!

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foreverasmosher February 1 2012, 03:46:23 UTC
That was so cool!! And I like how the other series ended with them having a girl and this has the POV of the little girl. Do write more please!!!

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purpleswag1 February 1 2012, 04:29:56 UTC
awww so cute<3 more please!
oh btw i was kiind of confused. wehn she was telling about herself it said.
" I am 80lbs and 4’5 and I am 12 years old." but you said 10 in this line
"s a ten year old I know everything about love. But I think fist kisses are the most romantic thing in the world, especially when the princess kissed the frog. "
lol sorry i just had to point it out
anyways i loved it :D

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raeofthestage February 1 2012, 04:41:10 UTC
damn it.... she is ten....ill go fix that...

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raeofthestage February 1 2012, 04:42:12 UTC
all fixed ^.^

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lediine February 3 2012, 03:44:29 UTC
" but now that I’m twelve I sorta understand it better"

You missed one. ;)

It's a cute story so far though.

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mcmm1 February 1 2012, 05:41:33 UTC
AWESOME !!!! i love love love love IT!!!!

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raeofthestage February 1 2012, 15:01:55 UTC
thank thank thank you!!!!! :D

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