Heey. Sorry. This is really late. I haven't gotten a chance to just sit down and idle.
But, uh, anyway. Looks fine to me. I'd change a dialogue - specifically the "now quiet, you. It's time." But that's because I think Light's a little more formal and would probably go, "Now be quiet. It's time."
Beyond that...haha, I suck at action scenes, and you know that. So, nope, no suggestions. Nice work, by the way. :D
Ugh. Errands. Errands. Errands. Of course I'd get drafted into doing errands when I'm back.
Aww.
And...yes, I do have a problem. It's just not so obvious cause I'm always eager to keep it to a minimum, and when I have to, keep it as short as logically possibly.. but, yeah.
Might fix it there if I decide to add an A/N. But I'm lazy and don't want to spam anyone dumb die-hard enough to have me on their author alert list.
Hrm. Sounds like you should be dreaming up short practice pieces too...I suggest MGLN, so you get 3-D aerial fun, and En stops pouting at me for fics. Maybe as part of...was it "Quandary"?
HELLO! Late comment is late but I just noticed this and yes, fic plz! From both of you. NAO. :D Although where did the pout come from though? I never did o_O;
Anyway I stopped by to link this. I was loling at the true-ness of the caption, when I was like, 'wait, is that the same owl that Rae posted on her lj?" K, on second thought, I don't think it is.. I remember the one you posted having particularly lovely clear yellow eyes. These eyes are just retarded. XD
Hrm, aerial battles. Could be fun to write. Except I don't want to have to study MGLN lore to get the moves and stuff right. And they don't have that many moves...bind, shield, homing missiles, cannon? Sure you never did. *pets boke-chan*
Pssh, study MSLN lore? Just ask me 8D It's esaily wikiable anyway; wiki has a list of their attacks and what they do and stuff. And you can always make up your own stuff o: I like one idea my friend wrote; Blood Magic, where it's uber powerful but you have to sacrifice some of your blood to activate it, or something... XD
I -definitely- didn't "*pout*", I rarely do o:
Eh yeah very different. Yours is a lot prettier but mine suits the caption more. XD
Anyway, off to get my bloody mac fixed >_> And if you still Vind, I sent you mail!
*grins widely* Yknow, bondage, lemon, fluff, the usual. 8D
*pouts*
You're welcome! :D Aww, now I feel happy and goopey and like I should've given you the whatever remains of 250ishk I have to add to your 23421 million xD
I was thinking less of creative uses for Lightning Bind and more of ideas for new spells. Let me rephrase. What kinds of new spells - excluding Blood Magic, because that's been done in lots of places - can you come up with?
*laughs* Lightning Bind is one epic bind. And c'mon, electricity at your fingertips?! That's hot! Do a lemon! 8D 8D *snickers* And I'm sure we can think of creative uses for Sonic Move too 0:D Iunno, though o_o I suppose I could think about it or something. I've always been more concerned with the pairings / plot than the action scenes though. Unless yknow, the action scenes occur between sheets. :D Which, you should write.
XD
Waaaat. Sif u no miss me. ): Neeways Mac (and thus WoW, sigh)'s down for a few days so yeah you're stuck with me xD / x(
*snickers* Sonic Move might make things a little too quick though. Maybe inappropriate uses of Axel Shooter and Plasma Lancer are in order. ...'Kay not the kind of action scene I had in mind. At all. And a rather less interesting kind of battle 'cause it always turns out the same way.
Greeat...How about you write an MGLN fic? If you're gonna bug me, I get to bug you.
But, uh, anyway. Looks fine to me. I'd change a dialogue - specifically the "now quiet, you. It's time." But that's because I think Light's a little more formal and would probably go, "Now be quiet. It's time."
Beyond that...haha, I suck at action scenes, and you know that. So, nope, no suggestions. Nice work, by the way. :D
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Good point, I'll fix that. .........here. *grimaces at FFnet*
I can't recall you having a problem with them, at least? 8D Maybe you're just good at avoiding writing them. Thanks. :P
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Aww.
And...yes, I do have a problem. It's just not so obvious cause I'm always eager to keep it to a minimum, and when I have to, keep it as short as logically possibly.. but, yeah.
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Might fix it there if I decide to add an A/N. But I'm lazy and don't want to spam anyone dumb die-hard enough to have me on their author alert list.
Hrm. Sounds like you should be dreaming up short practice pieces too...I suggest MGLN, so you get 3-D aerial fun, and En stops pouting at me for fics. Maybe as part of...was it "Quandary"?
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Although where did the pout come from though? I never did o_O;
Anyway I stopped by to link this. I was loling at the true-ness of the caption, when I was like, 'wait, is that the same owl that Rae posted on her lj?"
K, on second thought, I don't think it is.. I remember the one you posted having particularly lovely clear yellow eyes. These eyes are just retarded. XD
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Sure you never did. *pets boke-chan*
Original is here. So yeah, different bird.
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I -definitely- didn't "*pout*", I rarely do o:
Eh yeah very different. Yours is a lot prettier but mine suits the caption more. XD
Anyway, off to get my bloody mac fixed >_>
And if you still Vind, I sent you mail!
MERRY CHRISTMAS! *HUG HUG GLOMP HUG ANNOYING* :D
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Uh-huh...
You did? When? I was on a day or so ago and didn't see anything.
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*pouts*
You're welcome! :D Aww, now I feel happy and goopey and like I should've given you the whatever remains of 250ishk I have to add to your 23421 million xD
*snickers* Been a while. 8D
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*grins*
Nah, keep it. Maybe one day you'll come back.
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Iunno, though o_o I suppose I could think about it or something. I've always been more concerned with the pairings / plot than the action scenes though. Unless yknow, the action scenes occur between sheets. :D Which, you should write.
XD
Waaaat. Sif u no miss me. ):
Neeways Mac (and thus WoW, sigh)'s down for a few days so yeah you're stuck with me xD / x(
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...'Kay not the kind of action scene I had in mind. At all. And a rather less interesting kind of battle 'cause it always turns out the same way.
Greeat...How about you write an MGLN fic? If you're gonna bug me, I get to bug you.
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And lol, it occurred to me that you could think of your errands as 'quests'. RPG player is me.
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