I love how Rodney's mind dictataed what the device would demand from Sheppard. Poor Shep - he just can't catch a break. But it makes a terrific story for us. I have to wonder about that .01 percent. Such a tiny, insignificant amount. I'm just not sure the ancient device will let them all away with that.
Loved the Star Trek references and Rodney's paranoia about what Sheppard might find in his mind. I hope 0.01 was enough - there's not much Sheppard can do right now until he gets a nice, long nap. Post again soon!
Thanks! I was worried that the Star Trek bits were too corny, but they've generally gotten a good response, so I'm glad I left them in. Next part coming right up! :)
this was so cool. I wonder if Carson wll tell Rodney about Shep quoting Spock! Loved the puzzles and zpm imagery - i was wondering how you'd portray Rodney's mind. You had me going there that Shep wouldn't be well enough to fix Rodney- but he managed, will 0.01% be enough i wonder?
Thanks! I don't think Carson would want to find out what John would do if he told, plus there is the whole patient confidentiality thing. I'm glad the ZPMs, etc. worked out well. I was stuck for a while on what to do with that, then decided to just go with the obvious. :)
Thanks also for your comments on the other chapters. They made me smile. :)
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The Star Trek references were funny.
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Due to Rodney's intellect I could only imagine the inside of his mind to be pretty complex...unfortunately for John, in his already worn-out state. ;)
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(Not that I'm a math whiz or Mensa material...I wish! LOL!) :)
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Thanks also for your comments on the other chapters. They made me smile. :)
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