SGA Fic: Waiting in the Cold

[radioshack84]

Title: Waiting in the Cold
Author: radioshack84
Word Count: ~1,800
Characters: John, Rodney, Ronon, Carson
Summary: Written for kriadydragon’s Gen Comment-a-thon. Prompt: Bed-sharing. Offworld, cut off from the stargate, Sheppard suffering after effects of heavy blood loss, Rodney has to sleep next to Sheppard to keep him from getting too cold.

Comments

[ellenoz]

Blood letting ritual ... squee!! Great way to fill the prompt, and a great setting all round. I'm in heaven - two great stories (after a crap day at work) and chock full of my favourite thing: a cold, exhausted head-spinny Shep in extreme need of warming up. And Rodney drool! Makes me smile everytime! I particularly loved John's confusion in this, really well written. Thanks for writing and sharing ... you rock! :))

[ellenoz]

Meant to also say the hyperventilating scene was so very realistic too ... a very nice touch to show how much trouble Shep was in

[radioshack84]

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! =) I can't resist a shivering, exhausted Sheppard either, so your prompt was really fun to write. =D

[jlnyr]

Just brings a smile to my face. Thanks.

[radioshack84]

=D Thanks for reading!

[dernhelm62]

That is so cute! Who knew that drool could be such a hot topic! At the end, I couldn't help but go, ahhhhhh. Thanks for this! :-D

[radioshack84]

Hehe...yeah, but you can bet Sheppard won't let Rodney live it down for a good while. ;) Thanks for reading!

[black_raven135]

"..........scrunched up his face in disgust when he realized that the damp patch on his shoulder was due to drool."

Talk about adding insult to injury........poor Sheppard
:D
LOVED it!!!
Thank you.

[radioshack84]

Thanks! =) I have a feeling Rodney may find himself answering for that one as soon as John's feeling a little better. Glad you enjoyed it!

[kriadydragon]

That was excellent :D Poor John, blood loss then getting drooled on ;)

[radioshack84]

He wasn't having a very good day, was he? ;) Thanks!