kkm fanfic : stitches and burns (wip)

[radcliffe_bass]

Title: Stitches and Burns
Author:radcliffe_bass
Rating: PG-13
Genre: General/Humor/Romance/Slight Angst
Status: WIP
Warning: Characters may be a little OOC.
Disclaimer: I do not own Kyou Kara Maou. Please do not sue me. (“,)
Summary: It was always Wolfram who made an effort to save their engagement but a demon can only wait for so long.

Note: This is shounen ai

Comments

wow

[dark_angel_kaos]

i never would have guessed, that was wolfram he is so just like gunter said 'un-wolfram like' but this story has promise i wonder is it just a one shot? or are you gonna continue it? I loved it anyway and if yuuri is gonna chase after him i'll love it more.

Re: wow

[radcliffe_bass]

Thanks for the comment. This is a story I posted in fanfiction.net (same title and pen name i'm using here) and still ongoing. I've already posted up to chapter 6 but got stuck half-way through chapter 7. My friend suggested I re-post and re-read the previous chapters to help me get back on track. So I posted it here (it's fun posting stuff here at LJ, very addicting lol) and hopefully I can find my muse back before I finished beta-reading and posting all six chapters here in my journal.

Thanks again!

[hwoosh]

I think I've read this before! You should seriously continue xD

[radcliffe_bass]

lol, if you frequent the KKM fandom in fanfiction.net that's where you probably first read this story. I've already posted 6 chapters there under the same title and pen name. I just got stuck half-way through writing chapter 7. My friend suggested I re-post and beta-read the previous chapters to get me back on track. Hopefully this would work. Thanks for the comment!

[hwoosh]

That's probly where I found it~ GAHH I'm running out of good KKM fics to read, I HAS SAW IT ALL Dx

I do hope you find your muse soon xD

[radcliffe_bass]

lol, I agree! I do hope she finds her way to end and don't get stuck in limbo. Thanks!

[vahinkoelain]

Ooh, tough decisions! Emotional conflict! Character development! *purrs happily*
I'm at school now so I can't read the next chapters right away, but I'm glad that this will be waiting for me once I get home.

One thing, though. Your tenses seem to switch at random. For example: "Gunter eyed Wolfram like he was nuts, the advisor can’t believe his ears; the youngest ex-prince doesn’t seem agitated by the fact that his fiancé is free to roam around and flirt with every beautiful demon in the kingdom." Also, I'd say that a semicolon there is a no-no and you should use a colon.

You should review some things in your grammar, but it's definitely not bad! Your writing is still very pleasant to read. :)

[radcliffe_bass]

Thank you for the comment! I admit my grammar is really bad so your suggestions and honest opinions help me a lot in making this story better. Don't worry, i'll try my best to make the chapters readable and hopefully find a beta reader. Oh and thanks for liking my writing, I really appreciate it! Thanks for the comment again. (",)

[hannah_asakura]

OMG! I thought I've lost this.. please continue your story, i reeeeally am looking forward for the next chp X)I thought you've abandon this story -sigh in relieve- please continue.. okay?? X,(

[radcliffe_bass]

Oh my! Thanks for finding this fic again, it's really flattering reading your comment! (*hugs*) I reposted chapter 2 and will be re-posting chapter 3 tomorrow night. My laptop gave me quite a problem and i never had the time to fix it until today. Thanks again for the comment!