Gundam Wing links, and also an explanation of the orgy poll
The orgy poll was inspired by reading this fantastic Gundam Wing story, Drift, which has the distinction of being the only orgy story I've ever liked: sweet, hot, plausible, and very very funny. No series spoilers, but as the humor is all character-based, I don't know if it would work if you don't know the series.
Torch's other stories are here. ( Read more... )
Torch's other stories are here. ( Read more... )
I really enjoy your story, too. When I first started watching, Heero and Trowa were the two I felt I wanted to spend more time together (after a while I added Wu Fei), and reading this reminded me that I need to start looking for stories. There's a lot which I like in your story... and it works as a whole, so I feel almost guilty for picking it apart, but still...
I love that Trowa refers to Heavyarms as 'he' but to Vaeyate as 'it'.
This cracked me up: "...get Lady Une and Colonel Une to stage a coup against each other." It could be humour or it could be pragmatism, and it works for being right on the brink.
And this: "Sorry," I said. "Maybe they'll let you install your own later."
Such a tragically wonderful insight into what will upset Heero. ^_^
I also like: "I didn't expect him to make it back to the circus, but the palm of a Gundam's hand was a better place for a pilot to die." and the way Trowa can say this so casually because it's simply true.
Whereas this, I love for the rhetoric: "He doesn't have quite the same aura of burning determination to die fighting, die trying, or just die..."
(not that it isn't true, too, but what got me was the way you put it.)
And this: ""Heero," I said, and couldn't think of anything else that was safe to say."... turning a stupid anime convention which annoys the hell out of me into something that is actually meaningful. Nice. :-)
Looking forward to part 2.
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