Oh, I love this already. Brilliant, brilliant idea to bring these fandoms together for a cross-over. Not sure if movie-Scott would have planned to kill Dean with no questions asked but oh well, all that happened to him must have changed him.
And I so love the outsider look on Dean and Sam. The dynamics between them, their pasts. Wonderful.
And Logan and Scott as gay couple? Ngahh! Well, I felt they had more chemistry than either of them had with Jean anyway. Mwahaha!
I must not have conveyed it well in the first part, but Scott has been investigating this for a year, so presumably Scott and Charles would have asked (and answered) all the questions before Scott actually travelled to Hibbing with a plan to kill Dean.
No, Logan and Scott aren't a gay couple in this story; Ororo told Dean they were, as a joke, in the first part.
It's been interesting to write about how the relationship between Sam and Dean must look to outsiders. To me, Dean acts a lot like a parent to Sam, and I like that about his character.
Okay. Scott and Charles having investigated this for a year raises even more questions for me. Because well, why didn't Charles just read Dean's mind? I know, Cerebro is not always available but to just set out to kill somebody without making very sure they're right about him? Hmmm...
In part 1 of the story, I explain that the Cerebro has not been functional for the past year, ever since William Stryker invaded the mansion and stripped the Cerebro down for parts. Without the Cerebro, Xavier can't read Dean's thoughts. Not unless Dean places himself within a mile a two of Xavier. (In X1, Rogue runs away from the mansion, goes only a few miles away to the train station, and Xavier is unable to locate her, even at that short distance, without using the Cerebro. So clearly his powers are not far-reaching.)
Okay. I just feel - from the movies, not from the comics since I didn't really read those - that neither Charles nor Scott would set out to kill somebody unless they were sure he was a danger. And with the jet they could have taken Charles near enough for him to pick up Dean's thoughts.
And really, I don't mean to critisice your story. I liked it after all. It's just this one thing which doesn't sit right with my perception of them from the movies.
My own thought was that Scott wouldn't find it necessary to fly Charles in, as the evidence against the Winchesters is convincing, especially the records of the St. Louis police.
But the evidence against Nightcrawler/Kurt was overwhelmingly convincing, too, and still the order was more a 'stop him! and talk to him!', wasn't it? I feel that Scott and even more so Professor Xavier are too ethical to decide to kill somebody without giving him/her the chance to explain themselves first. Actually I don't think they would kill somebody unless they were forced toin a right fight.
But really, your story, so your take on things. I'm gonna shut up now. :)
And I so love the outsider look on Dean and Sam. The dynamics between them, their pasts. Wonderful.
And Logan and Scott as gay couple? Ngahh! Well, I felt they had more chemistry than either of them had with Jean anyway. Mwahaha!
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I must not have conveyed it well in the first part, but Scott has been investigating this for a year, so presumably Scott and Charles would have asked (and answered) all the questions before Scott actually travelled to Hibbing with a plan to kill Dean.
No, Logan and Scott aren't a gay couple in this story; Ororo told Dean they were, as a joke, in the first part.
It's been interesting to write about how the relationship between Sam and Dean must look to outsiders. To me, Dean acts a lot like a parent to Sam, and I like that about his character.
Thanks again for reading!
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And really, I don't mean to critisice your story. I liked it after all. It's just this one thing which doesn't sit right with my perception of them from the movies.
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But really, your story, so your take on things. I'm gonna shut up now. :)
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