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[fic] Freedom is not Enough [Kio, Soubi]

Feb 22, 2006 03:59

Title: Freedom is not Enough
Author: Rhea Logan (yutaka)
Genre: Drama/angst
Status: One-shot, complete
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Kio, Soubi
Note: Because presencedear's fics engraved the abovementioned two in my heart firmly enough to give it a go. Please don't hurt the newbie. ♥ All possible faults are mine.

( Finally, after all this time, Aoyagi Seimei was out of the way. And? If that was freedom, Kio thought angrily, then Agatsuma Soubi was far better off held captive. By Kio himself, preferably. )

Comments 5

aluragayle February 22 2006, 15:14:25 UTC

^.^
Such rich, luscious pain...
Beautifully well done! ♥

aoyagi February 22 2006, 17:17:32 UTC

Hmmm... I actually got my stuff together and reviewed ze story properly ^^ Aren't you proud of me? :P ::hearts:: Yes...

I, of course, loved the story and you already know that ^^ Moving on...

First of all, I absolutely love how Kio steals a 'sniff' of Soubi's coat :P (damn, it sounds wrong :P). As with all of your imagery, it kills me dead and I can almost smell that tobacco and shampoo. Yeee~s, perfect indeed.

“And if you've frozen that pretty ass of yours, I swear I'll kill you.”Funny ^_^ And I love it. Perfect Kio, right there. Complete with a chupa in his mouth, which is (of course) missing there :P ( ... )

poftd February 24 2006, 19:36:26 UTC

T-T Kio~......... This was BEAUTIFULLY written. Wah, I'm being dragged into this pairing! <--that's a good thing. XD

[realizes this was written on her b-day] .O. Unintentional b-day gift! THANK YOU~! [glomps] <3333333

enchanter March 2 2006, 17:01:55 UTC

...how did I miss this comment? O.o;

Anyway - thanks! I'm glad you like it. I got dragged into this pairing by presencedear's fics, so I'm happy I get to pass it on now. ;)

[realizes this was written on her b-day] .O. Unintentional b-day gift! THANK YOU~! [glomps]

Hee, that's awesome. :D ::glomp:: Happy (belated) birthday to you. ♥ Hope you had a great day. ^^

anonymous August 29 2007, 22:33:00 UTC

Ah! Unbelievable! It's written so perfectly, and the characters are so true-to-self it hurts. Kio's tollerance for him is purely amazing, in my eyes... had I been in his place, I would have probobly left Soubi out there to die :P

I loved it, I loved it, I loved it. They say a good comment needs both praise and critisism, yet I can't think of a single suggestion that I might give to improve upon this - it's far too perfect already. :] Great work.