[fic] Beloved Disarray [Soubi]

[enchanter]

::waves:: First-time poster. Hello to everyone. :D

Title: Beloved Disarray
Fandom: Loveless
Rating: PG-13
Character: Soubi
Status: One-shot, complete
Genre: Semi-drama/angst, introspective
Wordcount: 550
Summary: A Fighter cannot belong to two Masters. Or can he?

Comments

[sephyelysian]

I'm late in reading and reviewing this (as I meant to when you posted it; I'm horribly behind in everything) but this is nice. I like that you attempted something from Soubi's perspective that wasn't horribly gratutious and out of character. I also like that you picked a point before Soubi met up with Ritsuka but after Seimei died because as a vignette it has a nice, intimate feel. ^^

That being said, I look forward to more Loveless fic from you. ^~

[enchanter]

Aw, thank you! For reading, and for the nice words. ^^ I'm glad you liked it - I was not exactly sure about posting (the way this goes for me with new fandoms and writing for them ;)) but in the end, I'm happy I did. ;)

::hugs:: Thanks again. =) ♥

[arctic_dragon]

So heart-achingly painful.
You really have to feel sorry for Soubi.
Lovely.

[enchanter]

Thank you. ♥

[cyberlina]

you have undeniable talent for writtin. very symbolical. i'm depressed now though...

[enchanter]

Haha, if you think that was depressing, then maybe you shouldn't read my other stuff. :P ::g::

And seriously, thanks. =) I'm glad you liked it!

[sushinase]

He would welcome the sun again, and let it melt the ice he had become, because Seimei's word was law. It was love, too.

beautiful, I was right, your writing's as wonderful as your graphic skills.

I adore the way you make the words dance around and then settle with an amazing clearity which makes you think :)