WC Fic: Fire and Ice

[rabidchild]

Title: Fire and Ice
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Elizabeth/Peter
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: Temperature play, PWP
Word Count: 900
Summary: Fuck him, but she loved it.

A/N: This is my fill for run-the-con Summer Porn Round. sinfulslasher tagged me with the prompt, “hot and cold” and this was all I could come up with, because I lack imagination. I don’t

Comments

[sapphire2309]

This was hot, but it wasn't HOT. I can't tell why.

I still liked it, though :)

ETA - I feel a bit crappy about not mentioning a single good thing, and trust me, there were many!

The "Fuck you" in the beginning was really effective. Your descriptions of the heat and the cold were pretty GUH! And the little shiver in the end was a really nice touch.

[rabidchild]

Thanks!

[sinfulslasher]

Holy...SHIT.

I dunno, if this is what you come up with when you lack imagination, I don't wanna know how explosive the imaginative stuff is!

This was exactly what I was hoping for, and you delivered, and you added a layer of tenderness and protectiveness to Neal's wickedness (if that makes sense) that made me go all gooey inside. I loved how he oh-so-casually kept checking in with her. ♥ Plus, voyeur!Peter FTW!

I for one am an extremely happy camper right now! :D Thank you!

[rabidchild]

Ah. Well, when the imagination is really fired up, we get talking penises...

So glad this worked for you!

[elrhiarhodan]

GUH.

I'll be back when my brain starts functioning again.

[rabidchild]

You are too kind.

[embroiderama]

Ooooooh, YUM! I love it.

[rabidchild]

Aw thanks! I thought it was about time El got to let her kink flag fly!

[tjs_whatnot]

JFC BUT THAT WAS HOTTTTTT! (and cold) heehee! ;)

I loved this very, very much!

<333333333

[rabidchild]

Aw, thanks so much!