Fic: The Mended Heart

Mar 04, 2012 13:38

Title: The Mended Heart, or Five Times Neal Cried Over Leaving New York
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Neal/Peter/El, Moz, Gordon Taylor
Spoilers: Judgment Day
Content Notice: Some frottage
Word Count: ~3600
Summary: He didn’t really have much choice, did he?

A/N: Fill for this prompt on the White Collar kink meme, calling for Neal crying ( Read more... )

fics, fandom: white collar, pairing: neal/peter/elizabeth, genre: angst, genre: h/c, character: neal caffrey, character: peter burke, character: moz

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winterstar95 March 4 2012, 18:58:16 UTC
Well, lady, I have to say I don't know how many times I checked your journal to hear from you with a story, but I am so glad you finally posted one! Yippee. I have to say, the pain you projected here is visceral. God it hurt, as much or more so than the actually episode. You did a great job, and let's hope our boys will be back together faster than one year!

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rabidchild March 5 2012, 14:45:32 UTC
I have a feeling there will be a LOT of tags written to Judgment Day! So many possibilities - this is just such a fic writing gift they've given us, yes?

I do get the feeling there will be some time that has elapsed when they get back to S4 - maybe it'll be 2012 for them, LOL

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leonie_alastair March 4 2012, 19:48:23 UTC
You made me cry too. Poor Neal. Very nicely done.

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rabidchild March 5 2012, 14:45:56 UTC
Aw, thanks!

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ivorysilk March 4 2012, 19:58:28 UTC
Yes! This.

Thank you!

(*still heartbroken over the season finale*)

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rabidchild March 5 2012, 14:46:47 UTC
Wasn't it awesome? Doing an "On the Run" fest soon on White Collar H/C so stay tuned with your prompts!

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ivorysilk March 6 2012, 05:02:21 UTC
GAH. I have already kinda sorta started writing one ... (do not remind me of my multiple wips and unfinished projects, because the new shiny things, they taunt me so ...)

But the season finale--I am torn. I think it makes me deeply sad--I am hoping they fix this, quick. I can't take this kind of thing happening to Neal yet again!

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pooh_collector March 4 2012, 20:13:23 UTC
This is a prime example of why I can't get enough of your stories.

Neal's pain, his need, his longing were so palpable. And bless Peter's righteous, loving heart.

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rabidchild March 5 2012, 14:47:20 UTC
Such nice things to say! Thank you.

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micheleeeex March 4 2012, 20:36:20 UTC
OMG THIS WAS FANTASTIC.

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rabidchild March 5 2012, 14:47:44 UTC
Wow - I got the capslock squee! LOL

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