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FIC: i can't get out of love ;; part 6

Sep 16, 2011 00:02

i can't get out of love (a love i had a grip on; now it's gripping me)

Author: Eskimo Jo
Rating: 18
Warning: language, sexuality, substance use.

( cos i cant do a thing about the way your world goes round )

ship: michelle/naomi, fanfic: skins, ship: naomi/emily

Comments 7

alluringcliche September 17 2011, 15:20:15 UTC

I really liked this. I liked that the ending wasn't completely clear but more open-ended. I always love how you portray the characters. Brilliant job!

doreah September 24 2011, 18:53:01 UTC

Thank you for reading! :D Yep, I purposely left the ending ambiguous. (I mean, I have my own idea what I would like to happen, but as a story I like ambiguous endings just cos there's always quite a spectrum between perfect fantasy and the reality of what perhaps would happen. So I leave it up to other readers to determine what they'd ultimately like to feel for the ending.)

But thank you so much again for making it all the way thru and your lovely comments :) xx

lazy_boo October 9 2011, 23:32:31 UTC

Ummm... what do you mean there's no more? I was devastated when I got to the end of this story, I could have kept reading it forever ( ... )

doreah October 10 2011, 20:51:51 UTC

Ah, I'm sorry! But thank you SOOOoo much. I could have kept writing it forever, tbh, but I figured I didn't want to push it lest people get bored, hehe. And huge thanks to your friend for suggesting it too! That's amazing :D ( ... )

thadarkslayer October 16 2011, 22:16:35 UTC

WOMAN! You and your Michelle/Naomi KILLS me. I just finished this in a marathon read, and I'm absolutely floored.

You really make them so absolutely believable. The really COULD work. I get so wrapped up in the devastatingly beautiful angst, that when I come out of it (ie: right now as I just finished reading) I don't know what to do with myself. Twice. You're going to do this to me TWICE. =) Feel free to do it a third and fourth time if need be. I'm sure I'll manage to "suffer" through it. ;)

doreah October 18 2011, 21:45:54 UTC

YAYAY!!! You are amazing :D

It means so much to hear that you believe they could work (and that I managed to manipulate them in a way to be effective in inspiring that belief). Cos with so-called "crackships" that's like... so important to me. It's all well and good to shove two hotties/two fav characters together and say they're a ship, but another to accurately explore and hopefully explain why and how they actually do match up.

And OMG Emily quoting at me? All of the hugs to you. Hehehe. Just... yeah. I can't express my appreciation (and the blushing) I have right now. Thank you a million times for such awesome words. :D xx

can i just say... jennabee123 October 23 2011, 22:34:58 UTC

I Love You, that is all.

your stories i love them all and they are always unexpected but so true and always lovely and make me feel so much and miss these characters.