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diamondspring December 16 2011, 05:18:00 UTC
aww such a cute story^^
i love the ending :D
you did a really good job with the fairy-tale genre!
xD and sho still manages to fail at the very end~

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r_tenou December 17 2011, 23:15:01 UTC
Thanks so much for the nice comment! ^___^ I'm glad you liked it.

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harunomasu December 16 2011, 05:54:18 UTC
Since I know the real story from the link you gave me, it's kind of weird to have this kind of ending LOL But I'm glad that in this story the dwarf is a good dwarf :D

Aiba/Jun is my OTP so reading this make me really really happy :D

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r_tenou December 17 2011, 23:15:43 UTC
LOL It is kinda weird, isn't it? But I just couldn't have Matsujun be bad in the end and get killed by the panda.

Thanks so much for reading! XD

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himitsu_17 December 16 2011, 06:24:11 UTC
Σ(・□・;)I just read this story for the first time (from 6 in the morning) like I was away from my computer when you posted it. And seriously I'm happy to have gotten then chance to read it! ☆〜(ゝ。∂)

I really LOOOOOVE all the Ohmiya parts (I'm biased anyway) ♪(´ε` ) And it was really cute~ My lovely Oh-chan as a lazy Panda!! So CUTE (*^o^*)

Thank you so much for writing and sharing ! And sorry for the smiley but i'm on my phone amd i'm really enjoying using the ones provided by the japanese keyboard ♪(´ε` )

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r_tenou December 17 2011, 23:16:23 UTC
CUTE smilies! Thanks so much for reading. ^___^ I really appreciate the kind words. XD

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arara_chan December 16 2011, 13:21:29 UTC
Yaaay happy end!! So cute >_< I like the star xD It's cool and it has melon pan xDDDD
And I loooove failing Sho xDDDD Poor Panda-san (Oh-chan), he couldn't eat his beloved fish xD
You did a great job writing the fairy tale :) It was beautifully written and really enjoyable <3
Thanks for sharing :)

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r_tenou December 17 2011, 23:16:55 UTC
lol So glad you liked it! XD Thanks for reading. <3

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jellybean6972 December 16 2011, 14:29:48 UTC
Aw~ I have such a stupid smile on my face right now. I really enjoyed this. I'm glad for the happy ending.

Thanks for sharing :D

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r_tenou December 17 2011, 23:17:19 UTC
Awwww, thanks! XD I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!! <3

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