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FMA: Gilded (Xenophile)

Jun 21, 2011 11:31

Twenty-fourth chapter of Gilded! First chapter can be found here, with links to later parts.

Title: Gilded
Prompt: Xenophile
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist (manga/Brotherhood)
Word Count: 274.
Rating: G
Summary: In which Winry understands more than she says.
Warnings: SPOILERS through to the end of the manga/Brotherhood. I've been advised by evil_little_dog to ( Read more... )

character: edward elric, fma fic, chapterfic: gilded, character: winry rockbell, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, fic, fma

Comments 10

sonjajade June 21 2011, 15:38:26 UTC

♥♥♥ so sweet.

r_kimono June 21 2011, 15:47:17 UTC

Wow, are you fast on the draw! ^_^ Thank you.

sonjajade June 21 2011, 15:58:59 UTC

LOL! honestly, I really don't stalk my friends page! REALLY!! XD

r_kimono June 21 2011, 17:41:17 UTC

Yeah, suuuuure. XD

slinkysoul June 21 2011, 16:09:00 UTC

I am gonna be so sad when these are over. :< <3 They're all so awesome and it always perks me up when a new one's out. You do an amazing job. ^^

r_kimono June 21 2011, 17:42:35 UTC

Aw, thank you so very much! I'm really going to miss posting these.

evil_little_dog June 21 2011, 23:11:13 UTC

AWwww! So sweet!

r_kimono June 22 2011, 01:51:07 UTC

:D Thanks!

kittu9 July 1 2011, 15:45:07 UTC

That's dear; I like that Winry knows her own mind so well (you record that with great consistency), and I especially like that she has work of her own to attend to. She comes across as being very pro-her own ability to do things, and it doesn't mean she loves him any less.

(I also like that she is unembarrassed; this is also true to her character, as pretty much demonstrated in canon.)

(You've catching me at my worst: blahblah talkin' 'bout female characterization + parentheses.)

r_kimono July 1 2011, 23:01:39 UTC

Never feel bad for rambling about Winry's characterization! I say this as a preemptive measure, since that's what I'm about to do. :)

One of the best things about Winry to me is that she does know exactly what she wants - whether it's becoming an automail expert at a ridiculously young age or understanding her feelings for Ed - and then puts her all into achieving it. She finds nothing difficult about reconciling those two major parts of her life, and I love that moment at the end where she sees Ed go off to who-knows-where and yet easily offers him her entire life before he goes.

So, um, I like to (perhaps overly?) emphasize that completely self-aware part of her when I write her. Glad it's come across! And now I have to apologize for throwing this long thing at you in response. Thank you for reading the fic and my nattering. ^_^